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stay out of AD
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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coming again and again,
got to stay out of the den.
hang up my writing pen.
seems more like an addiction,
rather than a voluntary restriction.
i volunteer
but again i'm here.


interferes with my writing,
sure is darn exciting.
got to get more serious,
even though it makes me curious.
reading and writing,
all the poets that are exciting.


planning on being the invisible man,
at least this is a coming plan.
plans seem to never work out,
traveling this poetic route.
right now i'm thinking,
as i finish this inking,
but i think
my ship is sinking.


life raft please!

one
 

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 Reviews of "stay out of AD"
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
Keep a Writing ON!
WE would miss your wonderful talents
and your words need to be heard
but, I've been where your words expressed all this!
a few times~
It is an addiction, a wonderful feeling- like a fix! :)
Warmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!

Reviewed on May 18, 2007
JUS KEEP WRITING AS YOU WILL.

Reviewed by Jennave Coz
Reviewed on May 17, 2007
I love this...Like another place I post...I go there before I check my mail...Thanks for sharing your art.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 17, 2007
You got me smiling Grady.....this old place called AD...is like coming HOME each time I log ON !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Cute, have me laughing! Know the feeling well.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
One, you invisible man? don't get too sure you haven't got me as the shadow of the invisible man.
You can run...but you can't hide, because we always will be able to find you, just by following the echoes of your words.
One...Two...Three, should I continue?
Georg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Hee, hee, your stuck here?

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
You may just need to recharge, I find I Do now and then...
Keep Reading, that always helps.

And if it's an addiction being in here, I'm hooked LOL.
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
keep writing--i enjoy reading

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
It is a addicting, but don't hang the pen up! Take a week or two off to write if you need to...I found this to help me, but boy was I piled up on reviews when I came back! You are a blessing here my friend! Hang in there!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
S-tay out of- AD = SAD

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
I know what'cha mean man!
It is truly addicting A'int it!

Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Don't you dare hang that pen up!! I love your poetry, it brightens my day and makes me think.

Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Yes, the Den is addictive; I admit my addiction--and proudly at that! LOL If it were not for the Den I would have never met you or my other friends!

Very well done, One; keep on writing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Yes, this den sure can be addictive! But, I have to agree with Rosemarie's statement, One. I hope this decision is the right one for you.
Be happy and safe,
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
I hope you don't brake this one habit. I look forward to your writes.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
I will save you sweet sweet man,dont ever stop writing.....as always I love your writing...Hugsssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
One,
Please don't go away. I love your poetry! You've been here, just a little over a year longer than I have. Keep the faith, but please stay here! I, personally, while I don't get around to reviewing as much as I should, would miss you if you go. You were one of my first supporters, here at AD. I respect and appreciate that.

Jill

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Sometimes a writer disappears to write more. I hope this is part of your plan. I enjoy your poetry. R

Reviewed on May 16, 2007
One,

Don't you dare go away. I love your writes; you educate; make one think; MENTOR. Please reconsider..........please????

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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