I was shootng for the top, then my plan went flop, I couldn't even get it to stop. Life put me in a trick, I was spiraling down quick. I tried to flick my bic, found it didn't even have a wick.
There I stood in the dark, many days I sat out in the park. Failure never was an option, seems my plans made the adoption. I learned to deal with failing, it's like a ship on the ocean sailing.
Without a good captain in sync, the ship might sink. So I went straight to the bottom, no one else knew I had sunk, I'm still down below, all the reasons personally I know.
What does a man do, when he's lost his whole crew? I'm still figuring the math, trying to keep the devil out of my path. Everyday I pray, still get out and play. The bottoms better this way. But for me it will be no surprise, if one day I rise.
Yes, those on the bottom do survive. You know what I wonder? Do the ones who make it to the top survive or does the air become too thin and they flounder? You have to wonder!
God Bless for a great write.
Lew
Enjoyed this positive write my friend, with your energy and desire to succeed, you will...I have faith in you my friend! Keep climbing onward and upward! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
the great thing about the bottom is up is the only way out and familiar if we tire of the climb. Lady J
Man keeps forgetting that higher he climbs longer the way to fall down. Then again, they say that he who never climbed had no fear of falling.
A twisted nice One.
Got it?
Georg
With your positive attitude, you will make it, I have no doubt. Life is often one step forward and two steps backwards, then all of a sudden, be get a burst and move to the top of the heap. Well written poem.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Sweet sweet man you will always be on top,your a wonderful,loving man..stay safe and well..Hugsssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace
God Bless for a great write.
Lew
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Love Tinka $*;*$
A twisted nice One.
Got it?
Georg
Take care,
Sherry
Love,
Chanti Lace