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no Thorns
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Roses are red.


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No thorns
just a rose,
life would be
better I suppose.
No hate,
only lovenly relate,
all in a happy state.

Yet we all
love the rose,
ignore the thorns
that grows.
Roses are given,
trespasses are forgiven.

Life is a rose growing,
we all know the
thorns showing.
Out of all
the lovely flowers,
the rose over showers,
in life it towers,
projects its powers.

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 Reviews of "no Thorns"
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
AWESOME similarity of a Beautiful rose of Life!
to me the thorns help GUIDE! as in trailing vines being guided to another place!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

STay Happy!

Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Ah, the beauty of the rose portrayed wonderfully in your poem, Grady. Yet, God has a reason for thorns...a protective defense at times, both for the rose and humans :o)
Blesssings Friend ~~ Micke

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Yes, you pay fine tribute to the powerful Rose in all of its beauty!...ET

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Wonderfully written poem and I agree with Ed ... hugs

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Roses are given,
trespasses are forgiven.

The way it was truly meant to be.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
I love poetic song
and offering about "the Rose"
To me, beside my beautiful wife
She the only one
"The Rose That Is"
Peace Brother"

William

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Roses are beautiful and as your poem attests, we have to watch out for the "thorns" in life and be careful for beauty too brings pain if we're not careful. A good write.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
after garden work this past weekend, i was reminded why i have always loved daisies! enjoyed your write


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