Days are Made (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

Days are Made
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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It's best to make your own day.

Don't make my day, I don't trust, it's after a good day I lust. For me a good day is a must. So for this reason others I can't trust. Other people will monkey wrench our day, try to make two people happy and play, one being you, the other makes two. I'm a collector, if I take my wife with me, it's a sad face I see. I love writing verse, my wife hates it worse. She says I'm always on my laptop, her attitude goes pop, if I don't stop. I'm happiest best when I'm alone, no stone throwers stone. No crying and complaining, only one umbrella needed when raining. Two under one umbrella makes for a wet fellow. Of course it takes two to tango, if you don't dance, you can stay at home. If you like frowning you'll hate my clowning. I'm fun loving, I don't go for the pushing and shoving. Romeo and Juliet made their own day, of course Shakespeare wrote it this way. I'm not leaving my day up to you, all I might get is the screw. OnepoetGem

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Good one G! I feel alot of pain and contemplation within your words but then again you got it right, no one can your day except you...

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

You are bang on with this one Grady, love Holly

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

So true my friend, a great write and yes, we must make the most of our own day, cease each one with excitement for when it is gone, we can't go back to do what we didn't do...time don't wait on us! I think we all fit into the same category...my husband too complains when he is home that I am on the laptop too much! So, I rise a little extra early, and steal as many hours while he is sleeping or gone so that I can give more hours to him when he is home. But, don't it just bug you to pieces when you have an inspiration and are not near the laptop or paper and pencil! Got myself a mini recorder, easy to grab from my pocket and quickly record my inspirational thoughts, now he's wondering what I'm doing talking to myself in the middle of the garden...just kidding, he thinks it's a great idea and a handy gadget to take along to the grocery store....no more going back to get butter because I forgot it! Loved the write, very inspiring!
Blessings,
Joyce B.