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We Try
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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All we can do.


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We try,
sometimes I wonder why.
Other times we know,
it's as clear as
a picture show.
We try love,
regardless of all the
push and shove.

I've been pushed hard,
the daggers been
shoved through my heart.
Actually I should be
love dead,
with nothing but
hate in my head.

Love hardly ever works,
because of all
the bull that perks.
When we give up on love,
love gives up on us,
we die down inside,
the devil takes us
on a ride,
next goes our
personal pride.
Once the pride goes,
we slip and slide.
Slip into this
and slide into that,
sooner or later we
become totally
pinned to the mat,
with no idea
where we're at.

OnepoetGem


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 Reviews of "We Try"
Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
You're so right, if we don't watch what we allow to eat away and erode our hearts, we'll lose touch with reality. A nice write.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
This is another true but sad one, I tell you nothing worthy is ever easy, that's all I know. Keep your head up high, always

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
I agree with Trask on this one, love Holly

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Your're Right Here Poet 1...

Love Is MYTH...

TRUE LOVE IS COMPASSION..

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
You describe it so well in this excellent poem Grady!
Our love comes from Creator, and through Him only can
we love back with success...ET

Reviewed on June 9, 2008
The best defense against hate (yuck! who 'coined' that word? The devil?) is love...the latter given to us by God and His Son. And love has no connection to lust...
Blessings ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
good write--we have to continue working on being better, loving rather than hating

Reviewed on June 9, 2008

Just loved "We Try" One you are absolutely right throughout your penning, strong graphics go along perfectly.
"I've been pushed hard,
the daggers been
shoved through my heart.
Actually I should be
love dead,
with nothing but
hate in my head." certainly glad to know you did not succumb and that you made a choice to love. Needless to say I believe love is the answer vs hate, if nothing else it is good for the soul and the heart. Hey can make the mind feel abundantely GOOD too!

Love and hugs,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Wonderful poem and so true too ... hugs - Tiana


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