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Writing Challenge
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Don't worry this isn't an exercise for anyone to perform. Anyway if I put out a writing challenge which required anyones participation, I'd get ignored. But let someone like Bernice Angoh or Labelle Rouge put one out, everyone would be trying to participate. Just keeping it real, and I don't want to hear no crap about my friends loving me. The number of friends loving me could probably be counted on one hand, five fingers that is. So dispense with the bullchit please. This is simply a poem of verse or something worse. Take it or leave it, I could give a ratz azz which.


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Write one poem of verse
it's the beginning
of the curse

In the potato chip commercial
they say

"You just can't eat one"

Same goes for writing
especially verse
In the door comes the curse
or maybe something worse

The challenge is to write
another then another
You'll find it either worth
or not worth the bother
If you keep on versing
sooner or later you
might start cursing
Because in your efforts
to be a poet
your peers will start
busting your azz
As you progress
it will or will not come to pass

But the honest critiquing
will be good for checking
and correcting
If you hang in there
you'll end up somewhere
like here
Writing in the den
with other poets mature and
immature women & men
The mature ones will
be a blessing
The immature ones will
also teach a lesson

You'll get better
or give into only writing the letter
You might want to write
a dear John to yourself
Saying goodbye to
writing period
That is if you are weak

If you stick to writing verse
and feel like you're good
The next challenge maybe
trying to get published
However after maybe
getting refused
You'll feel used and abused
maybe a little confrused

Get published one time
you'll try for a second time
If you're strong you won't quit
Quitters don't win
Winners fail over and over again
They keep on until
they force a win

OnepoetGem


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 Reviews of "Writing Challenge"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Just keeping it real..no crap this is.... :)

Hey hope I count for one finger!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Just like to review poems in my own words, from the heart and tell people what I get out of them. This leads me to now give up and keep writing as poorly as I do and i'll probalby improve. If I don't my own satisfaction is appeased some too. Thanks for the hints.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
well expressed--it does become addictive--writing ones thoughts etc--

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Write on Grady! I think to become a writer one has to believe in oneself.

Work hard, never give up, no matter what others say. There are too many people in this world, you can't please them all.

Hugs,
Sandie May :o)

Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Some real wisdom in perserverance Grady. Thanks for sharing your poem and now I'll have to think of a challenge to run!!


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