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Butterfly in the Window
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Sometimes we can be held back by nothing but our own minds and fear.


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The window is clear
the butterfly sees
where he wants to fly
but in the window
he'll die
Flying with all his strength
the full window length

Going nowhere he flaps
his wings harder even more
next to the window is
an open door
His freedom is a few feet
away
yet in the window he stay

Some years back I was
like that butterfly
I saw where I wanted to go
but I was being held back
by an invisible shield
and for a long time it
wouldn't yield
My freedom was right next
to this invisible force field

I grabbed the butterflies wings
and set him free
watched as he scrambled to flee
All the time knowing
that myself had been set free
no longer held back I clearly see
where I want to go

 

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 Reviews of "Butterfly in the Window"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 14, 2009
Perfectly penned...wonderful imagery...indeed we are all butterflies at some point in our lives.

Anna

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
This is wonderfuly written and I love the message. Much wisdom in your poem.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
The message is so perfect. Well done, love ya, Holly

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
Very nice imagery, it really brings your struggle to life for the reader. I'm so glad you were set free.
Connie

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
Poetic wisdom.

Reviewed on July 13, 2009
OPG,

What a wonderful analogy. The trapped butterfly and your trapped soul. Thankfully, they were both freed. Great write.

Mary

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
GOOD WRITE WITH THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT SUPPORTS YOUR THEME WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
Internal beauty reaching out, expressed well, full of emotions....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
a beautiful write!


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