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On the Sun
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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We have more fun, in the sun, unless it's cloudy then there is none.


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The sun shines everyday
unless some clouds get in the way
And they will
then along comes a chill
which isn't a thrill
What happens in the universe
affects the way we feel

Your smile is your sun
unless you don't have none
then life is less fun
Sooner or later you will be down
and your sun will turn to a frown
Even so
some wear an inner glow
and like the sun it will show
Others will feel and know

Actually the sun never leaves
it's the universe that deceives
According to the earths rotation
the sun then shines on every nation
Down inside us all we have
a sun that never really leaves
It's our attitudes that darkens
and deceives

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 Reviews of "On the Sun"
Reviewed on January 8, 2010
A very positive outlook on life with the sun as its metaphor. Great job. (Personally, I'm getting sick of 90% days of sunshine! desert southwest

Mary

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
You are so right! Our negative attitude is what brings darkness to our lives. If we are positive the sun will always be shining. Great analogy! Take care, and Happy New Year! ~ Chessly

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
So True. Wonderful analogy. Liz

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
How true

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
Great Write Grady
most enjoyable reading
But there ain't no sun where I am presently
its cold cloudy and snow is expected
and the folk here in the great state of Georgia are in a panic
because it has been forecasted to prepare themselves
for 1 maybe 2 inches of snow.....the panic is real for sure
they swarmed "Publix" their local supermarket and bought all the bread and milk......lol
Me I just want to go back home deeper south where the sun shines warmer......
Peace be with you Brother

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
i love this -it has a cheery feel to it!

Reviewed by Joel Sattler
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
true enough

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