Dream Of Me (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Such beautiful writing. I'm so glad I found Author's Den.
You are awesome.
John

Reviewed by (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

but i already do......very good!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

a romantic delight!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Romantically beautiful.
All I can say is ditto to all the remarks. Lovely.

~E

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Excellent and wonderfully romantic Erica.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

3-01-03

You Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Beautifully written.
Nancy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Do you know how happy this makes me Erica, my friend! yes! you are gifted to wtite romance, listen to Amor...It's time;-)!!!

Reviewed by D. Fitzpatrick (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Erica, this one is resplendent! You truely know how to ambush the emotions.

Thank you for reviewing my work.

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Oh, Ericaaaaaaaaa, It is Gorgeous...I, oh...I want to try sometime, also, LOL...BUT..WOW!
This is very sensual and gorgeously written, I love it! I would love to learn how, even for a just oncer....and this, for a first! It is so beautiful

"Dive into the cool
crystal blue waters of my eyes..
Do not be afraid..
Let the tides take you..
Do not struggle..
Know that this love
is your destiny. "

Just awesome..loved this part, especially, oh! If a man wrote this to me, I...I...I'd dive (Okay, I'd be scared as heck, but...oh!)
applause for the beauty of your words woven into this exquisite 'dream'!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Erica, this poem is a resounding success. First try and a winner. I hope you are understanding what I have been telling you.
You have a natural talent and write well. You will get better and better and expand your areas of control over many forms and types if you keep at it. What a beautiful love poem.
Bill

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

I consider myself to be relatively well versed in the matters of the heart and I can tell from this write that you have a talent for romantic expression. I hope that this trend will continue for I shall be looking forward to reading more.
Amor

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Hi Erica,
BRAVO!!!!
You did great...
Continue with the
romance... :)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Not bad at all for a romantic awesome poem you should try more they are fun trust me I still havent tried haiku but someday might you shouldnt shy away from something just attempt and see how it goes great job on this

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Well for a first attempt it's fantastic Erica.
'Dive into the cool
crystal blue waters of my eyes..
Do not be afraid..
Let the tides take you..'

Beautiful!
Chrissie

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

Not bad for a first romance poem, sensual, enticing and well written. With practice you could set loose that romantic spirit I know lurks in the depths of your soul waiting to emerge when the pain subsides.