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Splinter
by Erica Ivory → (All Poetry by Erica Ivory)
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Sharp slivers left behind..

Drops of blood ripple

the waters of the dieing.

An open wound..

Deep but not seen..

Wooden spears in the echoes

of this beating heart..

As hopelessness shatters dreams..

Ever so slowly drowning

in the bottomless black

of humanities blood filled ravine...

The heart always beating...

Yes, always bleeding..

Yet never never seen.

  
    

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 Reviews of "Splinter"
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
A painfully well-developed heartfelt composition! Excellent work.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
wow....your lines full up so quickly
i sometimes have to catch myself and go back
you are a very creative pressence here!!!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 27, 2004
The broken heart begins with splinters, one by one. Until the deed is done. Very good, Erica.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 27, 2004
Very moving piece Erica!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2004
beautifully painful write

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2004
Such a moving piece....

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 27, 2004
Great to have you back Erica...You have been missed...
This is a very sad and moving pen...
Peter

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2004
Enjoyed your new work!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 26, 2004
just awesome! i felt your words reverberate within me ...

Reviewed on September 26, 2004
This was so very sad, deeply poignant poetry,

Reindeer


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