Lets break it down.. One on one... What you have.. You thought you won.. Now you see your hell has begun.. You had to have what was not yours to take.. Now you are sorry.. Want to walk away from this grave mistake.. Put your hands where they just didn't belong.. Now pay the consequences.. This consequence is life long.. Live in your tiny cell.. Think about the life You took.. Was it worth it? Maybe not.. But then to you maybe so.. See if you feel the same as you grow old.. Watching life pass you by... And you think you are the only one to pay.. What about her family.. Your family.. Lives changed in one single day.. Changed forever.. Grief so strong you can smell it.. Taste it.. Children's hands filthy.. Digging Pleading.. Screaming For their mother.. The one YOU took away.. Lets break it down.. One on One.. You have a coldness in your eyes.. You are man without a soul.. Don't know how you got that way.. Don't want to know.. Evil.. Malicious.. The devils son.. Live in your pathetic mind.. While we live in the one you created... With the crimes you have done.. Watch the little girl cry.. You held her in the palm of your hand.. Yaa.. Lets break it down.. One on one.. They say our life has just started.. I think our hell has just begun.. If you break it down one on one.
O " Erica This has more power than I can explain!!
One helluva write Girl!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
pretty powerful Ericka, and sees deep, al
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
WOW--Erica...... !!!!!!! Deep, dark and UGLY! ONE ON ONE is the BEST way to do anything, solve anything....you got me here. I had to keep reading every line. This is fitting for this time of year as well. Right on the mark!
Prime-Time Crime Time (600 pages) is a collection of 35 fictional crime/detective stories and the work is author Jay Dubya's 43rd published hardcover/paperback book.
One helluva write Girl!!
Love Tinka
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie