My heart is neutral (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Bhuwan, this was simply exquisite. So unusual but exquisite

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

wow neat piece B. this is a joy to read. I can relate with this. G

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

I agree with bittersweet.....but wrought with such a unique and loving hand....... loved it ty, Dani

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

Beautiful write Bhuwan, you are always the lover. Mikii

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

bittersweet poem beautifully written, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Masterful poetry Poet!!
Can feel the pain and bittersweetness of these
verses..................

Bravo HUGS~ LOVE ~ LUCK
Lady peg

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Bhuwan,
Stunning poetry, it moved my very soul!

Beautifully composed!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Just beautiful Bhuwan...loved the touching
heartfelt feel to this...and the art..floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Beautiful and heartfelt Bhuwan!!

Love & Hugs Tinka

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

So beautifully written Bhuwan, and so moving, beautiful heart-felt poetry,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

And keep it flowing, it's too pure to not.

Love
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Very meaningful, beautifully expressed Bhuwan
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Reality is sometimes not of what we want it to be;
but we all learn to live in it to cultivate our dreams. ~ Sandie Angel, March 23, 2004

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Ah, sometimes, it's toughest to awaken from the the most beautiful dreams. So full of emotion, this.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

As does your wonderful talent for writing.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

"My heart is neutral" flows with the contents that deliver stimulating scents from the garden of the heart.

Happy Spring Season!

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Those dreams are no fun...so in this case we will hope that your dream doesn't come true! Good write Bhuwan. Lisa

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

I can feel the sadness of the life in this poem....Masterful poem, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

and on and on... Sad, yet beauty filled.