Sleep, sweet darling, sleep (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 9, 2004

Bhuwan, I have so been looking out for your posts, but have missed this whilst I have been on holiday... but so glad both you and I are back here again!! Your beautifully crafted and delicate writes are ALWAYS worth the wait. I love this: it is like the sweetest lullaby but sensuously adult in its concepts. Gorgeous imagery and lacey language. I love the unique ideas about entering into sleep and the dreamworld here, too. The twist at the end leaves me with the question - is this an unrequited love? I hope not - and won't be for long, even if it is, that's for sure!! Another Romeo and Juliet piece here, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 2, 2004

Its great to read your writes again
they never disappoint
poetry written from the heart.

Peace ....William

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

your writes always possess such a classic feel; this one is no different. write on, poet!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Bhuwan -

Perfection, shear perfection ... a fabulous piece!

Robert

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

Those words would probably manage to put even me to slep-and I never slep.
Outstanding write.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

That third stanza is perfection, the love is beautiful- is the sketch a Picasso? :)

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

So soft and tender, Bhuwan, with a gentle yearning. I especially like this:
"I’m coming to fondle
Your lips with my lips
In the balcony of your dreams."

So good to see you posting.
Hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on July 23, 2004

What a beautiful piece Bhuwan, may your dreams be fulfilled. Peace and blessings.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Very soft romantic write :-)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

so tender with a quiet passion,

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Dreams are good friends Bhuwan!!

Beautiful as ever!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Beautiful and so romantic.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

This was so lovely Bhuwan, absolutely beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Beautiful poetry......

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

ohhhhhhhh
wish i wrote it! lovely!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Hi Bhuwan:

This is beautiful sweet and tender write. Very mesmerizing. Great to see you on the board.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Lovely write... only in our dreams we can go places of the heart!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Bhuwan,
Very beautiful and gentle love poem. I love these lines :

I’m coming to fondle
Your lips with my lips
In the balcony of your dreams.

Simply Awesome.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Bhuwan, this is a very sweet poem...really very beautiful, filled with such tenderness and peace...great poem...Fletcher B

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Dear Bhuwan,

Poetry suffused with warmth, love and tenderness.
An absolute Gem!!
Thank you for sharing

Warm hugs
Elga