I asked my heart,
'What did you gain
by giving off love?'
It answered back,
'It is my nature
to give. I know
nothing, except to
give. You are not
a lover and you
know not what love is.'
I am a lover
and I am lit by the
radiance of love
emanating from the light
of her heart
that revolves around
my soul, as the Earth
that revolves around
the Sun to a cosmic beat.
I COULD EAT THIS!! And if you were here I'd just gobble you up, you sweet, sweet man!! You are a man afer God's own heart indeed - you ARE love incarnate and a true lover in the broadest sense of the word in all its varying types. In you lies the fundament of what it means to love - totally unconditionally. Bless you always. Hope you got my letter!! LOL Kate xx
This one is just tooo beautiful and inspiring to pass without commenting. I love the message within this piece. The gift of love should be unconditional. Fantastic write!
You express what "true love" is in these verses, Bhuwan. It is a lovely but strongly meaningful write as well. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace. Regis
my soul, as the Earth
that revolves around
the Sun to a cosmic beat.
love is universal, and i beleive it eminates from our inner cores as vibes that touch others......i mean....well when a person is in love......they radiate.....it shows.......people are nicer to you when you are happy and in love.......its a connection........its almost nuclear.......ok ok......getting off my soap box here........I do like this write.......god bless........Anita
If ever there was a poem that explained the meaning of true love, then this must be it ! Your feelings so exquisitely expressed in this powerful write. Thank you for sharing Bhuwan.
warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
A powerfully stated romantic poem, Bhuwan.
You have all the elements necessary to show
where true love lies, and how it connects one
person to another.
I salute you, Mr. Poet!
Enchanted Desire, published by The Wild Rose Press, tells the story of a beautiful young college student, Shanna, who is looking for a fresh start and a way out of a bad relationship. She meets and falls in love with Kenny, a sexy 6 foot 8 Native Ame
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a fantastic write
and they continue to get better
Willia ....peace
Poetic perfection from top to bottom - excellent!!
Robert
you seem always to have the right words to say!!!
enjoyed you
From the top drawer....
Peter
This one is just tooo beautiful and inspiring to pass without commenting. I love the message within this piece. The gift of love should be unconditional. Fantastic write!
Sandie May Angel
Carmen :-)
my soul, as the Earth
that revolves around
the Sun to a cosmic beat.
love is universal, and i beleive it eminates from our inner cores as vibes that touch others......i mean....well when a person is in love......they radiate.....it shows.......people are nicer to you when you are happy and in love.......its a connection........its almost nuclear.......ok ok......getting off my soap box here........I do like this write.......god bless........Anita
If ever there was a poem that explained the meaning of true love, then this must be it ! Your feelings so exquisitely expressed in this powerful write. Thank you for sharing Bhuwan.
warm hugs
Elga
You have all the elements necessary to show
where true love lies, and how it connects one
person to another.
I salute you, Mr. Poet!
a splendid example of it!;-) TY...
Stirs the emotions to the heart.
Love n Luck LP
Love Tinka