Shimmer of your smiles (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2004

Very,very powerful!A great poem!

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Nothing is as dark as the clouded vision and eyes that are veiled with sadness. But love does indeed penetrate the sight with a fresh understanding and enhanced world-view, so I constantly pray that your eyes will be raised afresh every morning to inhabit that womb of life and light. May you always be succoured and nurtured with the knowledge of the deep love that exists in the heavens - and on earth - for you and your little ones. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Powerful emotive verses that stir the soul, Bhuwan. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Bhuwan, what an excellent and sensual write. The darknes of the hymen of light could be likened to birth and the creatiion, so many hidden messages to explore.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

You have planted quite a profound seed of a poem, Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Bhuwan, this is a very sensual and outstanding declaration towards a deep emotional outpouring of love. Thanks for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

So romantic and intense, just lovely poetry.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Soul touching read Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

beautifully written...the hymen of the light? where does that expression come from, i've never heard it put that way before

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

This is a gem of passion and love. Great write.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

fine writing that stirs the soul...

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

Dear Bhuwan,

As usual, with your tender loving heart you have penned a gem, may she look into your eyes, and may those seeds of love not only be caressed, but bear fruit, therefore lighting up all your nights.
Beautifully expressed poetry Bhuwan, thank you for sharing.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

Soft and touching, splendid work.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

So beautifully spoken Bhuwan! She will light up
and her sparkle will fill your eyes with love!;-)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

Hope she caress
that seed of love
Excellent work......

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

"But unless
you look
into my eyes
and caress
the seeds of love
with the shimmer
of your smiles
tonight will be
the darkest night
of my life."

Beautiful lines.