I offer you my virginity (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 19, 2005

so beautiful, so sensual, so ethereal......

Reviewed on September 29, 2005

'But let not the union between
us, be our only motive' ... A beautiful poem Bhuwan! A celebration! ... 'and paint heaven in our core with the
in woven –flowery soul, of our ethereal rose.' Pure Beauty!
Love Suzie xoxo :-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

really wonderful romantic offering ...

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Wow, Bhuwan, this was very sultry. I like it very much.
Well done, my friend. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Bhuwan my friend
this is as beautiful
as a Rose coverd in morning dew.
Excellence is in the hand that held the pen.

William .......Peace

Reviewed by Mary Wilson

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

This is beautiful Bhuwan.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

Dear Bhuwan,

What you have to offer is priceless! And in my eyes, there is no gift more pure or precious.

Your heart a fountain of wealth and your love the glory, who would be fool enough to reject a gift so rare?

This is beauty voiced through the power of pen and a loving heart.

Wonderful poetry BRAVO!!
Bariya kavya syabas!

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Sweet and full of passion -- touching!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Never make my mistake!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

I like the title. It's so eye catching, yet knowing your style of writing, I knew there would be deep meaning beneath the act of having sex for the first time. This is a gentle, delicate, yet forceful poem. Beautifully created, thoughtfully wrought.

~Mari

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

A gift given, but once.

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

beautiful write, bhuwan; very well done! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

okay, i'll take it...great poem

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Oh! This is absolutely beautiful, Bhuwan. There is no gift more precious than the gift of self. This is romance at its very best.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

So very lovely Bhuwan, beautiful sentiments in this wonderful poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Bhuwan, I don't think you need to offer her your virginity. Your love will do, as well as your wonderful gift for poetry. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Sandy Knauer

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Very nice, Bhuwan. I can imagine how special it would be to be on the receiving end of an offer made so poetically.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Breathtaking poem. so sincere

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Most beautiful Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

I'll take it! oops,.;-). couldn't resist Bhuwan! This is a very beautiful offering to the one you love, to make a fertile poetic flower to blossom...

Eileen

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

"I offer you my virginity" brings a gift of understanding
to libidinal emotions. It is a tool of social reconstruction.

Enjoyed this composition and learned from it.
"I offer you my virginity" has delivered a profound message.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Beautiful write, Bhuwan! Passionate and romantic! Indded the gift of giving oneself completely!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by A. Keith Barton

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Your words transcend the sexuality in our world today and wish our young people (and older ones) had the wisdom to experience the gift of giving oneself completely the first time. Truly inspirational.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Let us soar on the ocean of our lips,
swayed by the oar of our righteous hips
and paint heaven in our core with the
in woven –flowery soul, of our ethereal rose

Truly romantic and passionate, Bhuwan.