Look…Look…. Look
What a beautiful sight to see
Two lovers walking together
Towards the path of their dreams
Teasing and embracing each other
Under the crown of Heaven's bliss
With loves sparkle in their pure eyes
Fully eclipsing even the sunlight blind
Look…. Look…. Look
What an emotional feeling to feel
Two lovers merrily kissing each other
In the garden of ornamented flowers
Hiding behind the multi -colored roses
Whisker away from its scratchy thorns
Completely vanished in each others adore
Just like in the ecstasy after the loves orgasm
Look…. Look…. Look
What a livelihood of contemplation to see
Two lovers laughing and joking together
Happily with the bond of everlasting love
Clearing the obstacles along their conduit
Paving the passage amongst the boulevard
Of their broken dreams, with the convinced
Optimism of togetherness exclusively forever
This was sooo beautifully-written, Bhuwan! The lovely picture goes very well with this poem, the leaves are so awesomely displayed. Of course, dreams are often made wonderful, it would be nice if we could often live in dreams.
Fantastic write and fantastic pic! Enjoyed this very much!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2003
The picture is perfect for the poem. And the poem itself is exquisite. By the way,
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I've taken my children to the art museum here in Savannah, the Guggenheim and the Heigh Museum and ask them to describe what they see. This is so true to your words in the description for we see the green leaves of forms, the rose petals of aromatic bliss and the movement that mother nature and you Bhuwan have the eye for rendering . Bless you for you have the keen eye of the child who removes any physical obstacles for the true beauty within.
--susan
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Fantastic write and fantastic pic! Enjoyed this very much!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
WOULD YOU LIKE A LITTLE PUSSY?
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/mtr.asp?id=44383&loc=Poetry
--susan
William
wonderful work here I love it.
Cheers Peg
Nancy
Thanks for sharing it..Pic goes so well with it too...
Jenni
Jack