I wrote your immortal name
With the fountain of my blood
Inscribed by the letters of trust
Along the rhythm of my pulse
Blanketed by the thirst of love
In the parched core of my heart
And this is just the beginning
Of our never-ending journey
Towards the domicile of love,
Were life blossoms genially
In the vessel of trusts broth
For you have already planted
A footprint in the inner core
Of my ever abandoned heart
And made by body, the garden
Of love and fountain of joy,
Where forever prevails, the
Heavenly ecstasy and delight
And darkness is not darkness
When you are with me, for
Even the Sunlight looks darker
In front of our loves vibrant light
Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "I wrote your immortal name "
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
Tender, yet passionate.
Adam
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
Yes, Bhuwan, this is absolutely beautiful. The Lady is more beautiful than any woman I have seen, and her face must be the excellent inspiration for you poetry. Bill Murray
Amazing, you get better with each new one you write.
Nancy
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
nice. Different slightly in tone or some other way to your usual pieces. Well written nonetheless and i understand what you speak of. Was beautiful. That girl is also quite quite beautiful
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Wonderful write ... superb ...
~Sanilnath
Reviewed by Eileen
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Wow! Bhuwan...gorgeous write with fantastic finale;-)!
The inner glow that is born with love rebounds with affection everytime the beat strikes the heart. You are the Love Poet and your poetry is a beat of your heart.
Peace my friend...spread the love.
Susan
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
Adam
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Nancy
~Sanilnath
Peace my friend...spread the love.
Susan
"And darkness is not darkness
When you are with me, for
Even the Sunlight looks darker
In front of our loves vibrant light"
So beautiful
Peggy