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Come and take me with you to the love's land
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The rain is over and gone
And the sun returns after the rain
But I have no pleasure in them
For me they're only harbingers of pain


My wound is so cavernous
Not ten thousand suns can heal it warm
The darkness caused by your absence is so dark
That only your presence can make it bright


Tears roll down from my eyes
As the rain pour down from the clouds
I am waiting for you to come and dry my tears
As the sun comes and dries the drenched lands


In the darkness I seek out the path
The path to lead me away from this hell
To the land of perpetual joy and delight
Far away from the comatose scene of this hell


Where are you? The radiance of my life
Can't you see that, I am sightless without you?
When are you coming back to take me with you,
To the place where there will be only you and I


Come and take me with you to the love's land
And put me inside your heart and lock it from outside
So that I could always remain together, happily with you
Dancing to your heart's beat along the tune of our love


Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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 Reviews of "Come and take me with you to the love's land "
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
Now this was lovely..just beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
your rhyme is flawless the poem beats well nice write

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Simply beautiful! Just tell her you love her!

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
very sad and bittersweet with a lot of rraw emotions bared another masterpiece from you agian

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Bhuwan both your poetry and the art makes this write a sumptious feast, of which I partake with gratitude and deep satisfaction...Thank you;-)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Can I get a ticket to this Paradise and will my raging heart welcome me? Your words complete a part of me tha I have no words to bring out. Thank you for speaking for me and please send me directions for the peace and love you paint wih your words is my destination.

Love, peace and harmony,
Susan

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
YES SIR, A WONDERFUL ROMANTIC WRITE, BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
This is beautiful.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
This is really lovely, sooo beautiful! Wonderfully written!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Bhuwan,

"Where are you? The radiance of my life
Can't you see that, I am sightless without you?
When are you coming back to take me with you,
To the place where there will be only you and I "
Pure beauty I love this one so much.... Happy thoughts
Peg

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Lovely as usual Bhuwan...may you always have happiness....thanks for your support..Floria

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
A beautiful, sad write, full of longing and love.
Chrissie.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Beautiful write Bhuwan. You express yourself well.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
Sad,, again bittersweet.. Keep writing so you can heal.. I feel a edge in your words.. something you feel you missed.. wished.. you would have done.. Great write!!


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