Oh, how much sweeter
Is the smell of love
Than the fragrance
Of one million rose
For the fragrance of rose
Is ephemeral but that
Of love is perpetual
Oh, how much brighter
Is the light of love
Than the radiance
Of one million sun
For the rays of sun
Only warms our core
But that of love heals our sore
Oh, how much deeper
Is the depth of love
Than the soul
Of one million men
For the cadence of soul
Only baffles our heart
But that of love embraces our trust
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "Oh, How much sweeter!"
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Oh Bhuwan what perfect poetic excellance this piece trully is!
~Nikki~
a poem that matches perfect with the wonderful picture such carfree love in the photo makes one fell lighthearted and happy;-)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2003
Bhuwan I am going to start calling you the Poet of Love
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Oh, how much deeper
Is the depth of love
Than the soul
Of one million men
For the cadence of soul
Only baffles our heart
But that of love embraces our trust "
excellent write my friend
peace and love Peggy
Psychic wiccan Deja Hamilton pulls shapeshifter Lincoln McCabe from the lake, and the two form an alliance against the covetous older brother who wants Lincoln dead.
~Nikki~
Love
Tinka
Dove ~
profound love write
William
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Oh, how much deeper
Is the depth of love
Than the soul
Of one million men
For the cadence of soul
Only baffles our heart
But that of love embraces our trust "
excellent write my friend
peace and love Peggy