You are in love
When your heart opens up
Like the lotus in the pond
Upon the advent of the morning sun
You are in love
When your eyes twinkles
Like the stars in the sky
upon the advent of the full moon night
You are in love
When your soul dances
Like the flowers in the garden
Upon the advent of the gorgeous spring
You are in love
when your thought swirls
Like the whirlpool in the river
Upon the advent of the gentle waft
You are in love
When your visage glows
Like the glowworm in the moonlight
Upon the advent of the exquisite night
You are in love
When your compassion grows
Like the bamboo in the lowland
Upon the advent of monsoon shower
You are in love
When your emotion is magnified
Like the first ray of sunlight
Upon the advent of the dawn
You are in love
When you smile from within
Like the twitter of the nestlings
Upon the advent of their mum
And....
You are in love
When you forever yearn
To be embraced
By the charismatic ams of your love
You are in love
When you don't want to fall asleep
Because your hope
Is more optimistic than your dream
You are in love
When you see the sun not in the sky
But in the eyes of your lover, whenever
She munches your lips with her lips
And finally...
You are in love
When your perception finds
Love in your life
And life in your love
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "You Are In Love"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Love is you personified..Love is gifted us by your pen...don't ever put it aside..be the Light you are... magnificent in all your Glory...Thankyou
Reviewed by sugar magnolia (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
"You are in love
When you don't want to fall asleep
Because your hope
Is more optimistic than your dream"
I am in love....and you are deliciously accurate in your description of it. My hope is more optimistic than my dream.
-becca
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2003
Actually I think I am in love - but not him! Maybe I should pass this poem on to him, if you don't mind?? I loved the last paragraph-that is outstanding. Wonderful words and a touching poem. Lots of love. S.
Good Morning:
Waking up reading from you is always a pleasure. You have a beautiful outlook on life and love & you're doing a wonderful job of showing the readers how to love. It's obvious from all the great comments, readers love to read of love. :-) I feel rich to read from you. Thanks Bhuwan. Keep Writing & have a great day!
You present a good description of love here my friend. I remember and try to maintain this perception in my life but times life hardens a person to the fact that some of life is just an illusion. GEM
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Bhuwan, you are also in love when your heart becomes overwhelmed with emotion and you can't speak a word, but find yourself drowning in the beauty of your lovers eyes.
Beautiful poem! Bill
Perfect picture of being in love....but not if the one you love does not love you back ...even just in small amounts...that tell a different story I think........but your poem carries hope!!
Great visuals and flow! You are the Romeo of love poems. Z
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Bhuwan,
You are still a poet of love.
I love all the aspects and tendeerness
captured in this excellent piece.
Love your quote.
""If you have a lover,
Then you are the richest
Individual in this world"
-Bhuwan Thapaliya "
Clapping and so happy to read your work. My friend never stop writing these pieces for us. {{Never"}}}}
Love ~ N~ Luck
Peggy
You are in love
When you smile from within
Like the twitter of the nestlings
Upon the advent of their mum
Although the whole poem is both romantic and profund, I specifically liked the above lines. You said your favorite site was lovestories.com. You really sound like a romantic. Looking forward to more of your poems.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
What a wonderful flow of beautiful words, images, and emotion to begin the day with...
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When you don't want to fall asleep
Because your hope
Is more optimistic than your dream"
I am in love....and you are deliciously accurate in your description of it. My hope is more optimistic than my dream.
-becca
Waking up reading from you is always a pleasure. You have a beautiful outlook on life and love & you're doing a wonderful job of showing the readers how to love. It's obvious from all the great comments, readers love to read of love. :-) I feel rich to read from you. Thanks Bhuwan. Keep Writing & have a great day!
*Marlene*
Beautiful poem! Bill
love;-) Wonderful poetry!
Excellent,
Reindeer
"You are in love
When you don't want to fall asleep
Because your hope
Is more optimistic than your dream "
You are in love...
when you write a poem like this!!
Jenni
Love
Tinka
You are still a poet of love.
I love all the aspects and tendeerness
captured in this excellent piece.
Love your quote.
""If you have a lover,
Then you are the richest
Individual in this world"
-Bhuwan Thapaliya "
Clapping and so happy to read your work. My friend never stop writing these pieces for us. {{Never"}}}}
Love ~ N~ Luck
Peggy
~Chrissie :)
~Joseph
When you smile from within
Like the twitter of the nestlings
Upon the advent of their mum
Although the whole poem is both romantic and profund, I specifically liked the above lines. You said your favorite site was lovestories.com. You really sound like a romantic. Looking forward to more of your poems.
tony