Hello, I Am A Thief (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ANTHONY KARIUKI (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

I wish every Tom, Dick and Harry read this poem;
A true inspiration.
Bravo SweetZephyr

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on September 24, 2003

Boy oh boy, Bhuwan,

you have a way with music and your lyricism and your heart sing to my soul!

Love,

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

I like this poem :-)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Excellent my friend
As always
enjoyed reading much

William

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Welcome, you're my kinda thief!! Come on into my heart, the door is open to ya! Great poem!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

really excellent poem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Bhuwan, you gave me some good pointers on how to be a thief;-)It didn't work! hahaha...Excellent write Bravo! I know the feeling!

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Oh wow this is excellent.

Nancy

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

I am sure she won't mind, whatever you steal from here. Whether it is her smile or her heart. But you are not a thief. You just take because you know it is yours anyways. Lovely write. Love. S.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

LOVE THIS!!!

And now will you steal me my love
And life will be alright
If that is alright
I love You

Will You Steal Me

If there is a change of plans
And someone let go of your hand
And things ain�t looking quite okay
You know you have a place to stay
And that is in the center of my heart
When you cannot fight no more
That�s when I really need you to come
To the bosom of my heart to protect you
I think with my heart not my head I know
And when things does not go my way
Will you love steal me
And carry me away from this place
You are the reason nothing can defeat me
You make my life complete
As long as you don�t leave
My dreams are guaranteed
Seems like I was always running
Then you walked into my life
Right into the center of my heart
Baby with you I choose to walk
Till the end of my road
And I have no reason to loose faith
Believe you me
Only you can heal me
And darling with you I will walk any road
I am imprisoned in my love for you
From every mountain I have climbed
And every river I have crossed
You were the treasure I longed to find
And now will you steal me my love
And life will be alright
If that is alright with you
I love You

LoveTinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

What a interesting thief you are! Great write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

I love this one Bhuwan, wonderful work.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

I LOVE THIS!!!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

I loved this poem Bhuwan...much applause! Z

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Very, very Good! A joy to read!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Masterful

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Good concept for a poem.
You are a thief alright ,you have stolen the den's admiration ,but guess what?
You earned it!
Keep it .
And keep writing us these beaut poems too.
I really enjoyed this one.
Best wishes from
Kay

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

I love this poem. You express yourself so beautifully. Drink of the love pouring on you from your readers. There is major flowing love surrounding you. Being dehydrated is hard but you'll make it. Hearts like yours always do. Have a great day. Expressing yourself is the best medicine there is.

*Marlene* :-)

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

So very lovely. ~Kerry

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

My dear friend...I cannot
believe the similarties in
our poems today!!!!! I hadn't
read yours when I wrote mine
or I would have saved it for
another day. :) Excellent
poem, my friend...as always
from you.

~*~Linda~*~

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Wow!! This is very lovely!!
Jenni

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Bhuwan, excellence in poetry is what you possess, my friend.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

Bhuwan, you already have everyone's heart because of your good heart. One good heart to another

Stealing you need not bother

love n luck GEM