Venomous Rose (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Thank you my frriend, for another
excellent write

William

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Bhuwan this is striking, such excellent phraseology...loved it...Bravo!;-)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Excellent metaphors indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

INTENSE. Love this one!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Yikes this took me on a climb excellent write Bhuwan I never want a rose to grow like that in my heart, mind or garden

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Excellent emotion....I feel ya!!

*Marlene*

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

What a sad poem, but wonderful. Touched my heart. Love. S.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

so much power behind this poem. Great

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

You capture the painful emotions well! Great write! Z

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Oh This one cuts like a knife, deep into the heart..Loved those last lines,

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

excellent allegorical poem...

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

How well you express the hurt of love...thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Ouch! Great well written poem!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

you have a terrrriffficc talent.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Excellent write, my kind friend..
Your talent soars in this one..
One of your best!

Love n luck...
~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This is a gem!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

A very powerful and meaningful piece. Excellent, Bhuwan.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This may be about a Venomous rose but it is a good rose of a poem. GEM

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Bhuwan,
Outstanding art and verses Poet!!!
"But now I realize, how silly I were
To sow the seeds of love in the soil
Of your heart and watch it thrust
Through my heart, a venomous rose "
Love can rip through the heart and I agree with Vesna on this one. Poet you are so full of verses of love and wisdom. Our gift is your pen.
Peace ~ N ~ Love Bravo~~~~~
Peggy

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

YES, Bhuwan..to some Love flies out the window if it is not backed up by wealth..let the her go..count yourself fortunate..for if she stayed she would destroy you...thank the venomous rose for it has saved your heart...

Vesna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

OOOOOO!!! This is real Good.......venom write!!

< < <Smiles>>>

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This is a different(subject wise) one compared to most of yours but nevertheless it is excellent ....as always.