But (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Lovely, yet again!

And so succinct and to the point!

What more can one ask?

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on August 7, 2003

Nicely done! This is very yin-yang

Reviewed by Judith Bailey

Reviewed on August 6, 2003

Simply spoken. Shackles of the mind are our emotions.

Reviewed by Hiren Shah

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Your first poem I read was one of the brightest I have read but this poem though concise is not one of your best efforts.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Beautifully said moving words, with fantastic art!

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

So much said in just a few words, beautifully done.

Nancy

Reviewed by Mary Cannon (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Short and well versed, very lovely write

In kindness

Mary

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Can only agree .....
I also know that feeling too well.
Superbly written
S

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Excellent Bhuwan! ~Z~

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Ohhhh very touching.....the highs and lows of love.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Says so much in these few words.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

My friend this is
an outstanding short piece
written into excellence

William

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

You say so much in this excelent short piece. Very well done, Bhuwan.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Ah me, this short powerful poem cuts deeply, so very sad,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

I love the way you have done this. Great form!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Yes, I've been there.... excellent write, no wasted words...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

to the point, full of vision in such a small space

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

You've captured it quite simply! Great!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

But this is an excellent one

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Very touching..and oh, so beautifully said..
Jenni

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

This one moved me Bhuwan!!

Know the feeling all to well!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by Anastacia Lee (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2003

Touching. Sad. Sorry.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2003

Simple and to the point. To often (myself included) writes put too many words drowning out the meening. You have hit perfection for this on. Bravo.