How beautiful is my love
Like an aroma, she refreshes my life
And embraces the libido of my soul
With those kisses straight from her heart
Her love shines like the sun
And drifts the darkness from my sky
Her love falls like the rain
And irrigates the parched core of my heart
She loves me and only me
Much more than the single mother
Who loves her only child
In the midst of voracious civil war
And like a humming bee flitting
From flower to flower, pollinating them all
She flits from my mind to the heart,
And heart to the mind, dispersing her love
That like the salubrious zephyr drifts
The darkness far away from my domicile
And nourishes my ravenous heart,
With the ambrosia of her complacent touch
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "How Beautiful Is My Love"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
A beautiful poem and a beautiful lady.
Lucky you
Nico
... It came showering gold, announcing "How Beautiful Is My Love" to depict the feelings of endless devotion in the humanity of my soul to define my being in the divinity of my LOVE.
Author Poet Bhuwan Thapaliya, Your "How Beautiful Is My Love" is a JEWEL for Poetry’s twenty-first century's Crown!
I praise Your heart, Mahatma Author Poet Bhuwan Thapaliya.
I thank You for sharing grace and LOVE.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2003
A beautiful piece, which I'm sure she treasures!
~Joseph
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2003
Bhuwan such great beauty in this piece, a love for all senses and thoughts...Excellant!
~Nikki~
Indeed she is beautiful and she is made the more with each rich poem you donate to us from her being in your heart. She and you are beautiful and blessed.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2003
Wonderful tribute to your love!
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2003
My compliment to your taste in beauty, Bhuwan. As always your writing is superb!!
Kudos!
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
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Lucky you
Nico
*Marlene*
Thanks,
Emilie
~Jackie~
In Spirit,
Bear
What a beautiful tribute, to a beautiful young lady..
Your friend
Trixie ::
... It came showering gold, announcing "How Beautiful Is My Love" to depict the feelings of endless devotion in the humanity of my soul to define my being in the divinity of my LOVE.
Author Poet Bhuwan Thapaliya, Your "How Beautiful Is My Love" is a JEWEL for Poetry’s twenty-first century's Crown!
I praise Your heart, Mahatma Author Poet Bhuwan Thapaliya.
I thank You for sharing grace and LOVE.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
~Joseph
~Nikki~
Two beauties, indeed!
I love the descriptive dance; your words are spellbinding, captivating, mesmerizing...
an unbelievably beautiful write. Bravo!
Tami
Love,
Susan
Kudos!
tony
Excellent to read this morning!
Reindeer
If she stops loving you I will smackarooons her nose Okay!!
You lucky-lucky man!!
Love Tinka
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)