I drop at your feet, not because,
I am too feeble, to stand on my own
But for the love’s sake only, to stop you
Marching away, from the trail of my heart
Though I know not, whether you love me,
Or whether you love me not at all
All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love
Now its upto you, love me if you want to
But love me for love’s sake only, and not for
The sake of sympathy, thinking that I am all
Alone in this vast word, because sympathetic
Love is as passionless, as the intercourse with
The drunken whore. So, love me, from your heart
And not from the sympathetic notions of your mind
Because I drop at your feet, not because, I am too feeble,
To stand on my own, but to hold you, and help you
Rise again, incase if you fall down, from the uncertain
Stage of your life, like the leaves in the midst of their prime
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "Love Me From Your Heart"
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2003
This brought a tear to my eye. How true are your words...
"Alone in this vast word, because sympathetic
Love is as passionless, as the intercourse with
The drunken whore. So, love me, from your heart"
Very well, you refresh the cliche' "or whether you love me not at all..."
All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love
Vaguely phallic...but then you did mention drunken whores ealier....you are rarely overstated, cherishing the astute amount of discretion and subtlety.
I wonder why you have alternating capitals to lower case letters when it does not fit the format.
Well, a good poem anyways.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2003
Wonderful, excellent, verse. Bravo!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2003
{{{{Bhuwan}}}}
How splendid to once again have a chance to view sweet, soft and tender verses from your truly gold and silver pen...this is breathtaking and gorgeous expression from a heart that knows really knows what love is!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Penprincess Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2003
Poet Bhuwan!!!!!!!
{{hugs}}}} This is beautiful.
"I drop at your feet, not because,
I am too feeble, to stand on my own
But for the love’s sake only, to stop you
Marching away, from the trail of my heart
Though I know not, whether you love me,
Or whether you love me not at all
All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love "
Love n Luck
Pen Princess ;)
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2003
As always your writing (and pics) are sensational!
...ahhhh...my friend..it seems YOU are ready for the Twin Flame connection...open your heart and allow it to draw her to you..she will come soon..perhaps she's already there..
Superb write..exquisite in its eternal beauty
Warm wishes
Vesna
This one touched me deeply. I loved your use of metaphors throughout, but I especially liked this:
"All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love"
Thanks, my friend for sharing this one. A full, clapping, standing ovation! Bravo!
Tami
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2003
"All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love"
"But love me for love’s sake only, and not for
The sake of sympathy, thinking that I am all
Alone in this vast word, because sympathetic
Love is as passionless," -
These were really great lines, and you are so right, love has to come from love, and not from sympathy. Good write indeed, Bhuwan!
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"Alone in this vast word, because sympathetic
Love is as passionless, as the intercourse with
The drunken whore. So, love me, from your heart"
~Jackie~
All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love
Vaguely phallic...but then you did mention drunken whores ealier....you are rarely overstated, cherishing the astute amount of discretion and subtlety.
I wonder why you have alternating capitals to lower case letters when it does not fit the format.
Well, a good poem anyways.
How splendid to once again have a chance to view sweet, soft and tender verses from your truly gold and silver pen...this is breathtaking and gorgeous expression from a heart that knows really knows what love is!
~Nikki~
{{hugs}}}} This is beautiful.
"I drop at your feet, not because,
I am too feeble, to stand on my own
But for the love’s sake only, to stop you
Marching away, from the trail of my heart
Though I know not, whether you love me,
Or whether you love me not at all
All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love "
Love n Luck
Pen Princess ;)
~Chrissie
Superb write..exquisite in its eternal beauty
Warm wishes
Vesna
This one touched me deeply. I loved your use of metaphors throughout, but I especially liked this:
"All that I know in this vague land
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love"
Thanks, my friend for sharing this one. A full, clapping, standing ovation! Bravo!
Tami
Is that butter resides hidden in the milk
And in every core resides the love
One just has to churn it with the rod
Of truth, affection, devotion, sincerity,
Harmony and compassion, to get the
Cream of nectar from the vessel of the heart
And bequeath the soul with the garland of love"
BRILLIANT!!!
~Joseph
*Marlene*
Very moving and deep emotionally touching!!
love Tinka
The sake of sympathy, thinking that I am all
Alone in this vast word, because sympathetic
Love is as passionless," -
These were really great lines, and you are so right, love has to come from love, and not from sympathy. Good write indeed, Bhuwan!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)