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If I fill The sky Of your heart With the Stars of my love Will you fill? The garden Of my heart With the Roses of your love ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ If I fill The vacuum Of your life With my Compressed love Will you fill? The fissure Of my life With your Fathomless love ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ If I grasp The rainbow From the sky And bind you With its bond Will you bind me? With the Garland Of your Cherubic Love ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ If I caress The core Of your soul With my Fidelity Will you embrace me? With the Silken fondle Of your Trust ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ If I whisper In your ears The mantra Of my True love for you Will you dance? To its tune And whisper back Your mantra Of true love for me ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ If I love you Without Any reason But for the Sake of love only Will you love me? Just the way I love you And forever put me In the pupil of your eyes ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ If I leave All for you And surrender Myself To you Will you exchange? Yourself To me And be all To me Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviews of "If I"

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

You need to write romance novels! Your poetry tells of a good novel! Outstanding....no--just brilliant!

Thanks,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

If I... was asked those same questions, the answer would be yes yes yes, and yes again to a fantastic write. Your inquiring mind of a woman is unique and beautiful TY Bhuwan
Blessings
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2003

This is one of your bests!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2003

(((Bhuwan))) This is absolutely beautiful. Fantastic form and flow. One of your best!!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Bhwan,
All that I can say
is WOW!!!
This is beautiful...

Your friend,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Yes, yes, yes! (Sigh) Wonderful words, Bhuwan! I really loved:
"If I caress
The core
Of your soul
With my
Fidelity

Will you embrace me?
With the
Silken fondle
Of your
Trust"
Great!

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Beautiful verses of love and
honesty of heart.
Taylor

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Stunning verses Bhuwan!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Man... every time I stop to read your work I am taken away by how beautifully you paint the wonders of love...That was an AWESOME picture!

--Karissa

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Bhuwan,

What a delightful gem this is! Written clearly from the deepest chamber of your heart. Absolutely beautiful!

Tami

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Bhuwan....what can I say....I love this...and the picture is perfect for it....floria

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Bhuwan, this is remarkably beautiful. Got lost in this. So I read my way out. Great write,,I agree with Ted. Lisa

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

So lovely Bhuwan, so very moving, I loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Profound Poetry!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

If you don't become famous, none of us will.

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Lovely as always....:>)
Jenni

Reviewed by Tarek Hassan

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

Dear Friend,
What a wonderful sublime pact of love. I pray it is possible in human life embedded as it is in drama, change and unpredictability. Unless perhaps you lead us all to the sublime center where the laws of change and of drama are transcended.

Tarek Ali Hassan

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2003

{{{Bhuwan}}}}
This is stunning , beautiful
"If I love you
Without
Any reason
But for the
Sake of love only

Will you love me?
Just the way
I love you
And forever put me
In the pupil of your eyes "
Excellent poet... Hugs and love and peace
Lady peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

Yes!!

If My Man asked me this...my answer would be yes....no doubt about that!!

But now he did not yet....so I will stick to you and your beautiful Poetry...and dream on!!

Hope I will get "My Ocean to Pop" to Me!!

Or Me to Him....aaaaagh what ever...hehehe!!

Beautiful magic write Bhuwan!!

A keeper!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

beautiful poem requesting truth and honesty from a most dear realtionship...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 25, 2003

Oh Bhuwan, Such beautiful requests and offerings should be wed;-)!I hope you find it! If you do please let us know it's possible, and not just a dream;-)!

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