The fate of life
Is often uncertain
As the wrecked ship,
In the middle of the
Ocean, so, don’t spend
Your precious life
Amassing the riches only
But spend your life
Dispersing the love
Because man becomes great
Not by amassing wealth
But by spreading love
And it is not what we earn
But what we are willing to sacrifice
Determines the supremacy of our heart
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "Don't Spend Your Precious Life"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Wise words
Life is too precious. Let's concentrate on the important things and enjoy the good moments.
Nico
Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Bhuwan,
Your thoughts go deep, and I am enjoying all your poems.
Dear Bhuwan,
As usual you enrich us with your wisdom and vision. The vast majority of people I meet in this day and age enquire seriously about what I earn in an attempt to assess my "worth"! All life's activities are reduced to material loss and gain. This includes dissemination of ideas and creative processes. Our world is sliding into applying this formula to everyone and to all things. We seem caught in a spiral that material values and power(money and arms) are all that matters and badly need your wisdom repeated and translated into applicable formulae naturally born out of expanded consciousness.
Tarek
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
I tell this to my daughter everyday, be careful how you spend your life. Thanks sending this to her email.
Life is too precious. Let's concentrate on the important things and enjoy the good moments.
Nico
Bhuwan,
Your thoughts go deep, and I am enjoying all your poems.
In Spirit,
Bear
As usual you enrich us with your wisdom and vision. The vast majority of people I meet in this day and age enquire seriously about what I earn in an attempt to assess my "worth"! All life's activities are reduced to material loss and gain. This includes dissemination of ideas and creative processes. Our world is sliding into applying this formula to everyone and to all things. We seem caught in a spiral that material values and power(money and arms) are all that matters and badly need your wisdom repeated and translated into applicable formulae naturally born out of expanded consciousness.
Tarek
Life and love are Precious.....and happiness too!!
And I am happy I found a friend like you helping me to remember the beauty of life!!
Warm Love Tinka
Vesna