There are girls and there are beautiful girls but what separates them is their simplicity. In the short run beauty certainly counts but in the long run it is simplicity that counts much. What I mean by this is that in the long run girls who are simple are beautiful girls. Beauty like the rose fades but simplicity never fades. It will remain forever from here to the eternity. They say that minds are like parachutes and they function only when open. My mind and heart have amalgamated and this had never happened to me before in my life. I cannot lie to you cause after seeing you, I am becoming more and more curious with each passage of time. The curiosity is teasing me. It teases me much and I am helpless cause curiosity is like a wheel rolling on and on. Have heard that love is a circle whose center is everywhere but whose circumference is nowhere. But I think I have now seen the circumference too and this would not have been possible sans you. The verity is that I am not only seeing the circumference but feeling it too. I tried my best to get out of this, citing some unforeseen circumstances but my heart says that this is a fact. And I know facts do not cease to exist just because they are ignored. You cannot ignore love. Can you. Hope to hear back from you soon.
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "LETTER TO MY DREAM GIRL (THIS COULD BE YOU)"
Bhuwan, It seems you know all about love, but are waiting for that special someone to share your life? It happens so unexpectedly that it leaves you breathless...just wait and listen my friend and she will answer your call. Best wishes, Kerry
You are way too young for this old bird but I have two gorgeous daughters who may just love this beautiful letter.I'll show them!
A witty idea for a poem.
Good one!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
Oh, how lovely.......and how very you....May your paths entwine forever.
This is absolutely divine. I especially like this:
"Have heard that love is a circle whose center is everywhere but whose circumference is nowhere. But I think I have now seen the circumference too and this would not have been possible sans you. The verity is that I am not only seeing the circumference but feeling it too."
May love arrive soon and quietly light upon your shoulder...
Hugs,
Tami
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2003
Very impressive.......
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2003
Bhuwan, I signed in just to review you. In here for a minute peeking. With a title like that -- who couldn't stop in to read and leave a remark?!! Bless your heart. When I read this, I was reminded of a review I had on one of my poems. I'll leave it on your message board. THIS is beautiful. You are brave for posting something like this. You are going to be having women fighting over ya! LOL.. Seriously, you have such a fine sense for the romance and sacredness inside of the four letter word love. I adore how you do this. You make it seem so easy.
The revealing of your love is beautifully displayed. You've poured out your heart describing to the readers exactly what type of girl you want for your dream girl. Some girls come and some girls go. Some are simple, some are complex. I'm glad you have it all figured out! ;-)Excellent as always!
Quite a beautiful letter, Bhuwan: I'm certain all we girls wish it were written to us personally. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2003
"But I think I have now seen the circumference too and this would not have been possible sans you. The verity is that I am not only seeing the circumference but feeling it too. I tried my best to get out of this, citing some unforeseen circumstances but my heart says that this is a fact. And I know facts do not cease to exist just because they are ignored. You cannot ignore love. Can you. Hope to hear back from you soon. "
Bhuwan, this is so beautiful, an excellent vignette, love letter that is the best I've read on love and what it is and does. It's all-encompassing, isn't it, and goes to forever. I'm a firm believer in this: Love does not do certain things, and love does certain things. That should remain in the forethoughts of all who have "troubled" relationships even. If it's love, it will not do certain things. Thank you for sharing this, good friend.... I love your insights and what they provoke in the reader.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
Absolutely delightful, It stimulates the MIND!
Hey does " your dream girl know " ? Or maybe she needs a cryptic clue or two :)
Hope you and she find each other
Love can never be ignored..."The full power of love" speaks the loudest!!
As I seek love in the silence of nature
I seek passion …
In the quiet moments of the night
For solitude allows the heart to speak
Isolation invites the heart to sing
Love remains the only power of the heart
It can change…
The disposition of the heart
The secret beauty of love does not lie…
Within the beauty or the colors of a butterfly
But within the silence of the cocoon
From which it come…
Yes it lies…
Within the quietest yearning of the heart
And the full power of love
That lies untouched
Deep within the whispers of the heart
It awakens and unfolds time and time again
Like the sea approach and return
Time and time again
Does love remains…
The only power of the heart
Bhuwan, You have an enormous talent, and a good heart. I truly hope she answers your letter with the same admoration as you have shown her in your words. Good luck! Lisa
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2003
"Love is a circle whose center is everywhere but whose circumference is nowhere."
That's cuz love is like the ever-expanding universe=the universe is circular but it don't have a circumference either cuz true love keeps growing and knows no bounds.
"They say minds are like parachutes and they function only when open."
With God, ALL things are possible. If one keeps this in mind, then they allow ALL possibilities to flow into their mind, and creativity is not only born, it EXPLODES.
If people would only take the time to stop and smell the roses, and not just look at 'em, they'd discover that most things are complex because people make them that way. And most things that appear to be complex usually have a SIMPLE solution. If one believes "With God, ALL things are possible" then soon the solution usually just pops in one's mind . . . don't EVEN have to think your silly head half to death.
BHUMAN: What you have written here is QUITE thought-provoking, as you should be able to tell from my comments. What you have written here is also EXTREMELY beautiful.
:) Bhuwan, you pen such eloquence! I love how you explore areas of sensitivity and oblique humanity you find in yourself or see through observing 'us', then write of them without condemnation. It is a fine quality and shines in your work! :)
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
EXCELLENT prose poetry(as if)...Bhuwan! I am impressed by your range of craft!
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This is superb poetry, Bhuwan, and I do hope you will hear from her.
Sheila
A witty idea for a poem.
Good one!
ty, Dani
This is absolutely divine. I especially like this:
"Have heard that love is a circle whose center is everywhere but whose circumference is nowhere. But I think I have now seen the circumference too and this would not have been possible sans you. The verity is that I am not only seeing the circumference but feeling it too."
May love arrive soon and quietly light upon your shoulder...
Hugs,
Tami
Teresa Emilie
Marlene
Reindeer
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Beautiful love Letter.
Taylor
In Spirit,
Bear
Now you are The Love Letter Master, too!
Blessings,
Libby
Hey does " your dream girl know " ? Or maybe she needs a cryptic clue or two :)
Hope you and she find each other
(((ch'erie))))
As I seek love in the silence of nature
I seek passion …
In the quiet moments of the night
For solitude allows the heart to speak
Isolation invites the heart to sing
Love remains the only power of the heart
It can change…
The disposition of the heart
The secret beauty of love does not lie…
Within the beauty or the colors of a butterfly
But within the silence of the cocoon
From which it come…
Yes it lies…
Within the quietest yearning of the heart
And the full power of love
That lies untouched
Deep within the whispers of the heart
It awakens and unfolds time and time again
Like the sea approach and return
Time and time again
Does love remains…
The only power of the heart
Love Tinka
That's cuz love is like the ever-expanding universe=the universe is circular but it don't have a circumference either cuz true love keeps growing and knows no bounds.
"They say minds are like parachutes and they function only when open."
With God, ALL things are possible. If one keeps this in mind, then they allow ALL possibilities to flow into their mind, and creativity is not only born, it EXPLODES.
If people would only take the time to stop and smell the roses, and not just look at 'em, they'd discover that most things are complex because people make them that way. And most things that appear to be complex usually have a SIMPLE solution. If one believes "With God, ALL things are possible" then soon the solution usually just pops in one's mind . . . don't EVEN have to think your silly head half to death.
BHUMAN: What you have written here is QUITE thought-provoking, as you should be able to tell from my comments. What you have written here is also EXTREMELY beautiful.
Thank you Bhuwan.
Robin