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O My Love, My Sweet Love
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O my love, my sweet love
I wish I were your treasure
So that you would always
Cherish my love forever
I wish I were your smile
So that you would always
Lighten my burdened soul
And brighten me forever

O my love, my sweet love
I wish I were your hunger
So that you would always
Munch the food of my love
I wish I were your soft bed
So that you would slumber
Soothingly over my flesh
Beneath the blanket of love

O my love, my sweet love
I wish I were your eyes
So that you would always
See me in front of your ogle
I wish I were your oxygen
So that you would always
Breathe me continuously
For your very endurance

O my love, my sweet love
I wish I were your shadow
So that I would be with you
No matter, where you saunter
I wish I were your slippers
So that you would step on me
And march ahead treading me
Towards the haven of ecstasy


Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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 Reviews of "O My Love, My Sweet Love"
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2003
She sounds divine Bhuwan..Stunning poem of love...My good luck to you and she.......My best, Dani

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Very nicely done B

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
O Bhuwan, the awesome poet, this was fabulous.
Excellent write. :)

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Bhuwan...a truly beautiful heartfelt write.
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Bhuwan: This IS incredible. So romantic. But it's no wonder, since you're the man who's in love with love. This mushy stuff just comes naturally to you. Happy Thanksgiving.
Susan Sparks

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
wonderful love poem.....

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
sighhhhhhhhhhhhh
sweet wishes
Sharron

Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
This is a cute, whimsical love poem... I like the little touches of slightly nutty humour which some may have missed, such as
"So that you would always
Munch the food of my love"
I also liked the bit about you wanting to be her slippers... strange but charming throughout.

Sara.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
A very beautiful poem, Bhuwan.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Oh Bhuwan..I always leave your Den floating with joy, hope and Love..ty soooo much!
Brilliant write!!!
Vesna.:)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
To be "all" that is the hope of love...beautifully written Bhuwan!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Thanks Bhuwan I love this beautiful write

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Reminds me of Omar Khayyam -- but "in front of your ogle" needs changing to some other word. Otherwise, it's a very nice job.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
(Sigh...) Dangerously beautiful...
This gem leaves me simply breathless, my friend. Just exquisite!

Hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Beautiful poem. So sweet yes.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
a very beautiful love poem who sentiment cannot be denied ...

Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Beautiful poem of yearning.

~Kerry

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Another great one!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
You have a very sweet pen, Bhuwan -- how can she say no? beats me.

Carmen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Me 2!!

Lol!!

Beautiful supportive write Bhuwan!!

Happy thanksgiving to you my dear friend!!

Love Tinka

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Oh this is so romantic. Great write!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Ok Bhuwan, get them slippers out :):)

Soft and tender as always. Where were you when I needed you :)

Damn
love Ch'erie

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Bhuwan, what a deeply beautiful love poem! How could she possibly resist this wonderful entreaty of love and praise. She must indeed be more gorgeous than a Mona Lisa to have you offer this encomium.
Writing this poem proves once more that you are Master of the written word. Your friend Bill

Reviewed on November 27, 2003
Nice romantic tune. I can almost hear the beat of the music. I enjoyed this, Bhuwan.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Layla Mason (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2003
You are soooo sweet Bhuwan, what a dreamy poem.

Layla


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