Dying eyes never lie (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 25, 2008

You speak of truth my friend...Great poem and great picture to go with it.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 5, 2004

terrible what some have to face. of course all these spoiled ass Americans find stupid stuff to agonize over. This is because they eat everyday and don't have to worry about getting their behinds blowed or shot off. So living eyes lie and are full of deciet. Short and powerful piece. G

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

A very touching write. Tugs at the heart, really!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

I cannot even imagine this suffering Bhuwan..and so much food is wasted....it is hard for me to look at that picture...you touched my heart with this...floria

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Bhuwan my dear you sure know how to touch ones soul..this is awesome,and sadly true..beautiful

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Bhuwan,

You keeps us vigiled by conveying the consciousness of true man's compassion for one another. In our world the sentries ( like you) keep us responsible. Well, at least, for those of us with a full and true heart for our fellow man and his suffering.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Very moving and emotive write...best wishes andrea

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

This is quite eloquent truth, painful though it is, the world needs to heed and do something about it. ~~BonnieQ

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

These few words speak volumes once again, Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Shocking truth! Great write.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

I have to echo Robert Jude here...when he says this
is a "stunning revelation."
You have recorded an insight into soul, in just a few
words!
Your poetry is definitely the kind that will endure as
a 'classic.'

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

This is very heartbreaking. What I admire about this piece, is that it only took you a few words to tell the story -- more would have spoiled it. Very good Buhwan.

Carmen

Reviewed by Tarek Hassan

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Heart breaking reminder of the folly of indiffirence towards the suffering of others while we have the ability to alleviate it. Hits straight into many tender spots. As usual your embracing compassion reaches out to the millions forgotten and voiceless and tells the world of tragedies untold and unheard. The real challenge is that each of us respond in the way they can and not just close their eyes and pretend that your poem and picture does not exist.

In appreciation.

Tarek

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

They don't lie..for the mirage of life at that point is void. Excellently penned as always Bhuwan. Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

This is so true !!

Thanks for sharing your wisdom with us Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Excellent.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Very compassionate and insightful..