In the ocean of your eyes,
there are the gems of humanity.
Laughter, compassion, harmony,
devotion and joy. Your smile, it
shines far into the smog of my future
and lightens the path with its gloss.
Whenever, I think about you
You give me company
Nobody and nothing
Can surrogate that unity
And I can live evermore
With that tenacious unity
Whenever, I hear you
You give me music
Nobody and nothing
Can compose that melody
And I can live evermore
With that salubrious melody
Whenever, I see you
You give me thrill
Nobody and nothing
Can match that feeling
And I can live evermore
With that nutritious feeling
Whenever, I touch you
You give me warmth
Nobody and nothing
Can spawn that sensation
And I can live evermore
With that fervent sensation
Whenever, I kiss you
You sow the seeds of immortality
Nobody and nothing
Can compete that fecundity
And I can live evermore
With that immaculate prosperity.
"Your smile, it
shines far into the smog of my future
and lightens the path with its gloss." What a sentence. Love this poem. It the most tender I've read from you.
Who be the lucky one, This is delightful, but of course, you are a master of love and Romance.
TY
Ch'erie
Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
I'm going to be lazy and just agree with Robert.If ever you want the company of an older woman..I'm here :))seriously,you are a fine writer Bhuwan..bravo
You portray a really deep and abiding love Bhuwan. Beautiful!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
Bhuwan...this is lovely writing...love your lines....
I did have to look up one word and after I did the last
verse came alive for me....great write...bless you..floria
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Love Tinka
Michael
shines far into the smog of my future
and lightens the path with its gloss." What a sentence. Love this poem. It the most tender I've read from you.
Carmen
Andrea
TY
Ch'erie
Love and peace,
Susan
excellent work.....
your words are beautiful
an excellent write
William
I did have to look up one word and after I did the last
verse came alive for me....great write...bless you..floria
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