She will win back my love someday (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 29, 2004

A very well executed and deep poem Bhuwan

Reviewed on February 28, 2004

I am speachless,Bhuwan.A powerful poem I read recently.
with love
David

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2004

Bhuwan, looking at the beautiful Lady in the picture, I can see that your have your eyes pointed in the right direction. Young man it is time to take action and point your heart in the same direction. Clearly "crimson and gold" must mix to form ecstasy. Your friend Bill

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2004

..touched my core..ty!

vesna :)

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson

Reviewed on February 20, 2004

"rests her prodigious hope upon the lap of my dissolute core"....mmmmm....great line....i loved this poem.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2004

This is simply beautiful, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on February 20, 2004

True belief, uncompromised loyalty.
Lovely Bhuwan, especially lovely!

blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by MaGicKaL HuMMiNgByRd

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

~*~ Beautiful write Bhuwan! Far from 'heartless' is thy heart my friend! The gifts you give are lofty from your Spirit core... not material trifles. This she knows.... ~*~

~*~*~*~ Love... ShiVaNi ~*~*~*~

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

Damn good stuff here. Be still my beating heart. I'm tracking you now. Lovely write.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

very beautiful write..Floreann

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

She is pretty sure of herself...great writing Bhuwan...very
moving...floria

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

Profound and provoking thoughts. Deep!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

Bittersweet.....don't be so hard on the poor girls heart!!

I am moved by this write of yours Bhuwan....hit holds a sadnest within it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on February 19, 2004

Very interesting poem -- different emotional levels throughout. Thought provoking.

Carmen

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

The last verse could be so sad,she living in the dream,he pitying her,knowing it to be different..and yet it could also be he knows that she is right,it is he who must find the love he has lost.Yes it could be said to love unrequited, yet she has touched him,is that then not love ?A wonderfully crafted write Bhuwan.

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

Bhuwan, this is entrancing and sentimental in an odd, dry way -- in the way of an off-handed romanticism, afraid to become sentimental, afraid to feel vulnerable. You play the part of a closet romantic with a wounded ego... an intelligent write!

"I have given her nothing, yet she
believes that she is getting more
and rests her prodigious hope,
upon the lap of my dissolute core."

A very telling, intriguing poem, sad and melancholy yet secretly hopeful -- a complex write!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

so beautiful
like the pic
justlike a woman..........

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

Beautiful poem with some enchanting lines Bhuwan! Lovely art...all the best to you!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

Great poem, but I know you've given her much to be desired. Lovely lady in the art picture...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2004

Wonderful write!