Smiles through bloodstained teeth (poem) by Ch'erie de Perrot on AuthorsDen

Smiles through bloodstained teeth
by Ch'erie de Perrot → (All Poetry by Ch'erie de Perrot)
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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If you come across one of these sort.....RUN! They come in all shapes and sizes & genders!

Smiles through bloodstained teeth Sizes prey intent on easy kill looks are so decieving yet are not! pleads boyish innocence opportunity knocks smiles through bloodstained teeth Friendless deviant needing self indulgence planned deals hearty meal of confidence polished to gleaming silver shine smiles through bloodstained teeth Unsuspecting victims challenge turns to merriment rather than enlightenment canine instincts fully alerted for any resistance made Smiling through bloodstained teeth Easy pickings prey falls low bleeding inside out devoured in a nights feasting carcase consumed till picked clean Meat stuck in bloodstained teeth Bones left bleaching in searing sun evidence of the systematic kill though dignified elements cover Jungle laws still apply Till retribution, Smiles, through pearly white teeth. Ch'erie de perrot Copyright 2007 Cal Copyright Australia Ltd All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Zahala San Simone

Reviewed on March 26, 2007

Whew--it's a dog-eat-dog world alright. LOL! Wonderful piece.

Wendi

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Ch'erie,

Very chilling, gives ya goosebumps. Easily taken in more than one context my friend. Great job.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 25, 2007

This spelld deviant all over it gave me shivery chills! Expertly written Ch'erie!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

A gripping write....thanks for sharing!!

Head hanging low.....you Ozzies did us bigtime with the cricket huh??

Love tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Stunned here as I search for the right adjective to describe this one, Cherry Pie, it captured and riveted my attention from the title on down. The reader can take many jumps with this one but the one I see is the lurking pervert type who preys on the innocent women and children. I love the ending with the justice for once applied. thanks Cherry loved it.

Fee

Reviewed by jude forese

gripping and well written, Ch'erie ... some excellent images ...

Reviewed by Gloria Gay

Eerie and effective. Startling images.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Oh yeah I got the dentists on thursday, I had bloodstained teeth as he gently yanked two teeth out last week...

Reads like my denists reminder cards..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Sounds like a human predator to me - usually the most vicious kind.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

I'D run like hell...enjoyed

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Ch'erie,

At first, I was thinking of a pit bull while reading this; but then, the second (and third) times I read, the picture of an abuser came to mind: both fit the descriptive verse you pen in chilling manner. Well done! Both smile through bloodstained teeth...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.