Beyond The Margins (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 3, 2012

Couldn't help but flash on the reality of today's writing that "means something," you know, the kind that allows "eternal were the days" to continue. So much wordsmithing today is surface, surface, surface, leaving little discovery of the layered essence of a thought. As I struggled through Infinite Jest, I was reminded of the rewards of such discovery. Your writing suggest same.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Lady A...wow...georgeous use of words...I think you have just prescribed the key to let love back in...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 22, 2004

Beautiful write, Lady A. Enjoyed.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2004

"when all was new," are the key words here. A simplistic time. A learning time. Good stuff, Lady A.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Incredible.......

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Beautiful write. I love the title and the text does not let down. Excellent!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

(((lady a)))

dear (((friend))), this is gorgeous poetry!

BRAVA!!! your talent shines in this one :)

(((HUGS))) and love *and continued prayers*, karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Most outstanding Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Yes so true, you write to the heart
of the matter. Brava Lady A!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Love is a many splendid thing. Beautiful write Poet.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Safe from evil if one stays in the blood of Jesus, love kicks hate into touch..

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Love may be patient but sometimes, simmered too long, it explodes :)! Great write :)!
Sandy

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Very Pretty Anita! I like this!!!!!!!!!

Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

A precious gem of a write Lady A. How beautifully you
crafted this one, superb in its simplicity and eloquence!

"the eyes of your understanding being enlightened, that you
may know what is the hope of His calling"....;-)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Brava Excellent poem and truths.

pax Lady peg

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

great work! Well done, Lady A!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Beyond the margins and hidden behind the thinnest of veils The Love That Surpasses All Understanding lingers close to make Itself Known and Understood in Language... you have expressed this wonderful Truth so sensuously... like the lover's kiss that it is! Just Beautiful! Thank you, Anita. Kate xx

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Love is a message to preach, and you did it uniquely here.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

I was talking to my friend Peter once. I said to him: "In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was God." Most religions twist this simple idea. Words without love are dead words. Words have lost their life. The poets breathe life back into them.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

You had me extremely worried for a minute, Anita; I didn't see a quote and panicked. Thank God you got it in there in the end!

Well Done!