Living Tissue, Living Words (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Lady A,

Fabulous write - superbly composed ... loved it!!

Robert

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

(((lady a)))

priceless beyond measure--beautiful testimony and write

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Anita this is so lyrical, Beautifully written!
our good thoughts are prayers and so are our
songs...prayer is heard by Him in many ways we
never imagine...To admit we know Him is what
He requires most!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Honesty is Gods Bestest Friend Anita!!

No need to pray toooooo often...or I will get no inning see...lol!!

Just kidding...but I know...God would not want us to "pester" him with minor things ...right!!

Great poem anyways!!

Love Always Sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Wonderful, Anita. I know you read my poem "Arrogance, Thy Name is Poet!" and got it at the end. LOL. It's directed to a particular brand of political/acitivist poet that I usually commend but that I also feel sometimes confuses the calling of poet with the calling of prophet, and some are as hypocritical as the religious preachers they ostracize.

While all poets have A Truth to tell, not all poets speak truth absolutely all the time. If they did, that would make poets gods. Yet some of these people would have us, poets and nonpoets alike, walk around in gray, dust our heads with ashes, and never see beauty or know joy until the world is right according to them. They seem to think that poetry began with Gil Scott Heron or with whichever Last Poet they discovered first.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

But He is privy to our every thought...so He hears you even though.
Anita, your words beat through the core of everything unworthy.
Excellent write!

Lisa

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

What gentle, quiet truths you pen, Anita. Power is not about loud or strong or angry... it's about knowledge and beauty, so beautifully woven into your poetry. It doesn't shout, it reaches out and shares.

Don't worry about not praying enough, though, cuz with all I ask/beg for, He's probably grateful for the rest in your heart. (smile) katy xox.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

A soft yet powerful pen Anita. I enjoyed it very much.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

You got it, Lady!! And its His breath you're breathing as you breathe out these words of pure worship. This puts a smile on His face for sure, just as it breathes life, truth and a sense of worth into our own hearts, too. This is an inspired gift straight from the mind of God - bless you for this "prayer". PS Don't sweat it - and same song sheet?! Nearly wrote on the topic of Grady's comment below today myself! Love your attitude of gratitude and the picture is divine! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

touching and very expressive, it's best to be honest with the man. A person that prays everyday and doesn't want to pray but every now and then is being dishonest and phony. The Lord know this! l&p G

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

luv the concept of this poem ... superb!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Great write!

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

What a sensual write!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

I love this!!!!!! Beautiful words Anita! : )

Jack

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Very warm , touching and inspiring Anita
Yup..We should all be grateful for the miracle of life...and the opportunities to show our love to the Lord..
Peter