ON GOD'S BREATH (An Explanation and Apology I GOOFED UP) (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

A thoughtful and wise prayer. We all falter and we all "open mouth, insert foot" on occasion. I love the line, "float my spirit on your sea"...just beautiful!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

the picture is magnificent!!!
and so is the words
simply beautiful

Reviewed by Randal Files (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

:-) Beautiful!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Lady A,

No explanations or apologies needed. A wonderful write, no matter the length or brevity of your words, your faith is evident. Thank God for poets like you!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

A superb account of your faith and dedication to the Father.

It flowed, I loved it.

Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

This is a very beautiful suplication...much enjoyed read.

Allen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

no doubt, an excellent conversion ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

This is beautiful, Lady_A and I thought I couldn't see it because I was using Firefox browser. I meant to come back with Internet Explorer, but got busy myself and never made it back. I am glad you posted it here again. I will send you a memo on how to convert.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Very nice. Enjoyed both the theme and the rhyme.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

I'm near tears from such a beautiful prayer.
Thanks for the experience.
Best wishes,
John

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

So beautiful and such a sincere prayer. I need to recite this before I go to sleep. If you read my recent poem, you'll understand.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

A lovely prayer, Anita - although I also liked the blank white Breath of God yesterday - it looked so celestial. (If you hadn't told us of your mistake, we would have never known - and many of us thought the blank page was most profound!)

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Believe it or not, they are both really good...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

to convert it open the bitmap crop it by something very "Little ans save as Pjg...lol!!

or send it to me I wil convert it for you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Actually I did not notice because I always read your posts and they are incredible. But I love this picture.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Hello Authors Den

The poem I had posted yesterday under the same name, might have appeared as a mystery to those who looked in on my page. There was a title, no picture, or poem. I have an explanation for that. I was trying to do a bit of computer art, and successfully put the poem on the picture I have posted above. But it came out as a bitmap, and AD cannot support those pictures. And the effort was rejected. I had no idea how to convert it, and even if it could be done at all.

While posting the phone rang, I got occupied here, and never went back to fix the page or delete it.

So for those of you who where inquisitive enough to try to figure out my cryptic messages.......and find meaning.....I salute YOU!!! You are a thoughtful deep bunch!

And apologies for my lack of attention to my GOOF UP!
pax...........A

Have a good day all!!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

We all make mistakes, said the hedgehog getting of the brush.

Great statement of faith.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Very beautifully said Lady A, I can still inhale;-)