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My Addiction~
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We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out~ R Bradbury  


My Addiction
 
Writing is not my drama
Nor the whip of pain
For betwixt the pen and I
I mask my given name
 
Writing is the stage I choose
Where I dance my life
No ballerina light of step
Words pirouette my flight
 
Writing is not my song of lips
Heart is where I sing
I lyric thoughts unspoken
Melody on wing
 
Writng is not my love
Communion I'd prefer
To better clasp and outstretched hand
And with a heart confer
 
Writing is a crutch I use
The armor of my silence
When my pen would scroll as sword
It wounds with gentle violence
 
Writing is not my blood
Nor is it my fire
It is my addiction
Of which I'll never tire
 
Pax
A
September 20,2005


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 Reviews of "My Addiction~"
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
As per the summary quote from Bradbury - I like what the Bible says along the same lines: "We are treasures in cracked clay vessels in need of a re-filling everyday."

The fifth strophe is as powerful a poetic statement as I've ever heard. Alice, you write in a wonderland filled with deliciously imaginative rivers.

I always enjoy dipping my cup into your waters.

A beautiful poem ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed on September 22, 2006
Well...Anita...For as long as you have readership, it is impossible to stop writing, for you make them proud of you.

Wonderful write!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2006
Refreshing and true passion, excellently described in your inimitable way. Great work! Panda :)

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 22, 2006
Perfect. Everything is perfect, the flow, the rhythm, especially your thoughts and words within. Excellent poem, A Pax. I applaud you.
Much respect,
CJ

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Holy MOTHER of Edgar Allan Poe! Pax this is PHENOMENAL! I'm keeping this one - oh, and... i'll track you - will you return the favor?

Your flow; your meter; your message - they all are perfectly and seamlessly imparted to the enthralled reader. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
And ain't the net a great way to share your life long passion...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
How can one so talented and filled with magical thoughts, poetic fingers,and such a spiffy garden;-) ever tire of it! Write on Lady A Pax

With Affection
Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Thank God for your "addiction" since it gives us such wonderful poetry to read from you. Thank you for sharing your gifts, Anita. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
A Master piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Anita,
Your words couldn"t describe me or my feelings more...chills over came me just reading. How wonderful to have the addiction of words and this is jusT an exceptional write in y way of thinking...
Write on!
Taylor

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
LOL. Well, I do call my site WritingJunkie, so what can I say to this? Fine work, Anita, as always. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Malcolm Watts (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Lovely piece A. You and I enjoy a love of traditional rhyme and metre. All the best. Malcolm WAtts

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
This is one addiction I would beg you never free yourself from.
Beautiful work.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Writing is the stage I choose
Where I dance my life

Dance On, and what a marvelous quote!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
You are all you say you are not really. That makes you an accomplished writer. Victor

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
I would have thought that that beautiful garden/yard you have got would be your only addiction...ed

Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Some addictions, their outcomes and their impact upon others if positive and inspiring are worth indulging. This is certainly represents one of them. The work of the pen is claimed to be mightier than the sword. True. Literary junkies jacked up with ink have made millions of people emotionally and spiritually high with their writings, changed the course of the world, even brought down empires. 'Gentle violence'? Fascinating oxymoron. A violence for our own good? 'Silence as armour'? Too often we have to make a noise to be heard, a noise with no solidity. The loudest most productive noises are often found in silence - we walk past too many good vibes at our peril.
Don't go into rehab Anita, keep the fountain flowing. We become addicted to your addiction

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
And thank God for that, Anita!
You possess a very astute spirit of discernment, which empowers your work, with an incredible relevance!

Par Excellence.
Loev, Rhonda

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
If you were a spokesperson for the poets of this world this poem could stand as our own. Beautiful put.

Fee

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Great dedicated pen for the self and with this you isloated my own need for writing. Great pen this one is!!! Kind'a laced wih a magic potion for inner perception too.
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Anita

Your addiction and compulsion to words, gives us your readership. the immense pleasure and benefit, of enjoying and savoring your unique and talented form of expression and intention..

Write on master craftswoman...

Peter


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