Hand Of The Father (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

This is quite beautiful! I don't know what else to say.

Reviewed on October 7, 2006

Hand of the Father...a beautiful poem with a meaningful title, Anita. Without the hand of the Father, where would we be? What would we be? An inspirational write, certainly for me. Thank you.

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

"Hand Of The Father"

A powerful penning.

Magnificent work and a wonderful message
for all!

Blessing to you,
Sincerely Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Our Father knows us better than we know ourselves. He knows what we need before we even ask. He even interprets the groanings in our hearts. And when we think we are about to sink in quicksand, before we realise, the hand of the Father has scooped us up tenderly into His and carried us gently and lovingly to the other side. Yeah, He's been there 'all along'.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

A fine write, Anita. Love the pic, too!
Kudos on the dancing kitty!
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Anita...One for publication! Truly splendid poem that has the rhythm to lull one into a trance like state, a mantra to take into meditation...you are so gifted! Thank you for sharing this keeper!

Eileen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

I Began to read your poem and stOpped at the beginning. I called for Mariah to come and listen as I read it. Then as she murmured sOmething about "how'd she write like that" I proceeded to read the poem.
You are awesome. The prayer is from my Heart and my daughter's as well. how do you do it Pax...how do you know what is in our hearts for the Father?
Amen.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

A great offering A pax.

Bom Bhole!
Rosh

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

A beautiful spiritual offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

If I had to choose, Im not sure which I prefered, your poem or the introduction...so it's safe to say, I enjoyed and learned equally from both! How often our concern for others leaves little for ourselves, such that we have to be reminded to take a minute to feel the gentle had on our shoulder reminding us that he is with us...I know the hand and the calm it brings. Thanks for sharing yourself with us.
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Dear Anita,

Often, when we are drowning, we do not see the hand reaching out to us in love. Beautifully written, as always, yet the format did not follow your intentions.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

With such an honest and open introduction that led into this poem of wonderful spiritual thoughts. Great stuff.

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

A reverent write, Pax!! He is always there, isn't He?! Thank you so much!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

B E A U T I F U L, Lady A; He's been there all of the time. :) Thank you for this wonderful reminder!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

This is so very beautiful and spiritual, absolutely lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

This is a most wonderful write, I agree with Victor...he does want us to call him as a child to a father..after all he is our father and in control of it all. Exceptional poem...keep up the good work.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

As Jesus taught us, the best prayer we can say is the "Our Father...." Victor

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Ask and it shall be granted unto you. Inspiring write.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Anita

A Capital write that accentuates your personal faith and experience..
Yep..He has always been there....just look and see..and most of all Listen..

Kudos

Peter