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Peacemaker By Presence
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Peacemaker By Presence
 
 
Down the black ocean, beneath the veined skies
Angry waves throttle clouds in the eye
Heavens counter with thunderous strikes
Seas sending typhons to counter the likes
 
Rollicking, crashing, washing to shore
Taking their fight to land on the mor
Bashing the flora, the fauna, and me
Pity the swimmers on a mad sea
 
On a mad sea, under the skies
Fighting because, the wind told a lie
The wind was a trickster not to be found
Breathing the truth, yet wailing his sounds
 
Such fight to last, by issue forgot
Valued and held...... less as is not
Down the black ocean, beneath the veined skies
 
Dawn broke the war, declaring a tie
 
 
Paz
A
 
6/21/06

 


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Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Such a beautiful write my friend...outstanding, I love to listen to nature so much can be heard, resolved, and overcome through natures peaceful songs...enjoyed this much. Bravo!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Never trust the wind, it gossips with the trees...
Your metaphors, damn forgotten what I was gunna say..
Though it kinda has a D' day feel...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Most outstanding masterpiece!!

Abnsolutely captivating!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
A brilliant write Anita! The anger in the sea and sky parallels the state of our society and the world. Well done!
~Butch

Reviewed by Sharon Lawson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
What brilliant words! You can read this and apply it to many areas of life apart from the sea alone. It reminds me, in maybe a strange way, of the horrendous hustle & bustle here in London, UK. Now walking down Oxford Street on a Saturday is a very challenging battle! "Dawn broke the war" - I'm home, safe at last! Many interpretations, I enjoyed it.
Happy Easter!
Shaz X

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Dear Anita,

Whenever I crave a melodic verse, my thirst is quenched by reading your work.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
"Pity the swimmers on a mad sea"

This could easily be a metaphor for living and struggling in a dark society. For some reason I kept seeing Scotland as I read this Anita, and I like the spiritual undertones you threaded throughout. I hope all is well.

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by William Haynes
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Nature can be the peacekeeper of the moors.
great poem, beautiful picture
bill

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Anita,

Outstanding meter, flow and rhyme my friend. Your poetry always touches the soul. I love the ending.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Interesting anita and so alive with the dark and dangerous winds of rage. This is a classic and one I am definatley adding to my favs.

Happy Easter.
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 5, 2007
A fantastic rollicking storm of a poem! Loved the rhyme&rhythm and the pic too! Good to see you Anita!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Happy Easter

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 5, 2007
i like the rise and fall of the feel of your write, like the sea itself

Reviewed on April 5, 2007
I love this write, Lady A, beautifully imaged and thrillingly penned! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 5, 2007
Dawn has a tendency to do that doesn't she...;) ed


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