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Peacemaker By Presence Down the black ocean, beneath the veined skies Angry waves throttle clouds in the eye Heavens counter with thunderous strikes Seas sending typhons to counter the likes Rollicking, crashing, washing to shore Taking their fight to land on the mor Bashing the flora, the fauna, and me Pity the swimmers on a mad sea On a mad sea, under the skies Fighting because, the wind told a lie The wind was a trickster not to be found Breathing the truth, yet wailing his sounds Such fight to last, by issue forgot Valued and held...... less as is not Down the black ocean, beneath the veined skies Dawn broke the war, declaring a tie Paz A 6/21/06
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Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Your metaphors, damn forgotten what I was gunna say..
Though it kinda has a D' day feel...
Abnsolutely captivating!!
Love Tinka
~Butch
Happy Easter!
Shaz X
Whenever I crave a melodic verse, my thirst is quenched by reading your work.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
This could easily be a metaphor for living and struggling in a dark society. For some reason I kept seeing Scotland as I read this Anita, and I like the spiritual undertones you threaded throughout. I hope all is well.
Light and Wisdom ...
great poem, beautiful picture
bill
Outstanding meter, flow and rhyme my friend. Your poetry always touches the soul. I love the ending.
Happy Easter.
Fee
Love,
Eileen
Happy Easter
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.