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This poem is dedicated to all poets on AD, and beyond. Imagine an island, where everyone spoke in metaphor. The inhabitants could be called the Metaphors,whose society would later be known as "Poets".
Muuhaahaaa
Citizens Of Metaphorica
On the isle of Metaphorica, by an ancient turquoise sea
In a locale 'neath a coral sun, words shimmered handsomely
As the breeze of evening veiled the day, and the sands drank dulcet tides
Each voice spoke in tongues, where phrase was always bride
Their wealth was marked not by the coin, or on their boundaries owned
It was by expressive count, each soul would find their throne
As voice would song, the words of day, each Metaphor would say
Their thoughts, wrapped in sweet fragrant song of syllabled bouquet
Days engaged in burnished talk, blessed by the gift of words
Silken, sweet and vivid, as colorful as birds
They understood each other, yet to an outside ear
They sounded somewhat crazy, when visitors came near
The Metaphors were different, indeed a breed apart
Each became bilingual, as words became their art
For when they spoke their words traced silver lace before their eyes
Yet when they spoke to others, they spoke to ears closed blind
Paz
A
4/24/07
Love the classic feel to your verses. This is a unique take on our little Den society here. You take it to the beyond. Love that! Hugs,
Sheila
Love, Taylor
Aberjhani
~Butch
Love Tinka
nice piece of writing
bill
Brett
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
Regis
Great tribute to the poets...Citizens of Metaphorica
Outstanding Job my friend
Your words capture such vivid picture and Imagery
Excellent flow love the soft tone!!
Outstanding Write!!!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your friend....Morning Star
Be safe,
Karen
You crafted this beautifully
Eileen
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Fe
Beautiful tribute to the poets of the Den; I know they'll appreciate this write; I do. Well done, Anita; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Eh!! Only Kidding. We'd have to come up with a secret password for access to the island. Can Ya swim? (lol)
Tropical paradise in wonderful verse: don't let the ship depart without me!!!!!!!!!!! Love this one. WELL DONE!!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A fun-filled island with a tribute to boot! Whens the ship sailing?
I'm on it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~