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Ice Child
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Ice Child



A woman yearned for motherhood
All throughout her life
Then thought one day to make a child
Formed of snow and ice

The winter wind saw the shape
It's cold caressed the form
And with a kiss from frozen lips
It came to life as born

Beware it told the mother new
Beware of many things
Beware of light, beware of sun
For it takes, what I bring

The mother did as mothers do
Protected, loved and guided
Her child did, as young and new
And with the rules, collided

Willful as the winter wind
Mindless of advise
Her mother's warnings on deaf ears
She thought the sun....so....nice

And then one day she was no more
She vanished in the spring
The mother cried a pool of tears
As nothing did it bring

And there the moral lies for all
For both parent and child
What comes too easy, goes as fast
As life is but a while

Pax
A
1/29/10


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 Reviews of "Ice Child"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 1, 2010
So unique. So wise. Would make a wonderful story.

Ron

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 30, 2010
Like the rhythm in this, Anita. I also like the story as a whole; it's an important life lesson. Hugs:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on January 30, 2010
Excellent - much wisdom!
Becca

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 30, 2010
Powerful write. My ex grandfather in-law lost a brother to the sun and its heat.
Many things said here.
Superbly written, in depth, wisdom, warning, and descriptions. A difficult subject matter put across with brilliance.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 30, 2010
wonderful lesson here-i really like this!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
Tempus Imperator Rerum

Time Commands All

You weave magic as ever with your eloquent pen Anita.

Peter

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
A GREAT FANTASY WORK...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
So very very true Anita...wonderful work you share with us.
fee

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
The moral sinks home in the last stanza. Oh so true, Anita. Brilliant!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
What comes too easy, goes as fast
As life is but a while

This is so well done. I love the flow and the meaning expressed. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed on January 29, 2010
I am impressed! What an anology Eillen (hope I have tour name right, it's been awhile here) What a great truth Story. On the guidance witg/by Mother Nature! With consistency, Love and Nurturing, even birthing can be heartening!
Blessings of PEACE and HARMONY, SOULFUL_PurplePassionsSHEEoxxo
Beautiful baby birth above!
WRITE ON!
READ ON!


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