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The Hand of Deliverance
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We cannot direct the wind but we can adjust the sails.
~Author Unknown~


THE HAND OF DELIVERANCE


These barren shores, and jagged cliffs, have stood a million years
The waves have smashed, as the eons passed, and cried their salty tears
A seamist rises in the morn, to hide a ghostly sea
The stage is set, its the same plot, that replays endlessly


Along the shore, a woman walks,and looks out towards the waves
She sees the ship that holds the man she'll love until the grave
She waits so very patiently for it to sail to shore
Because she knows, when anchors drop, her vigil is no more


But as she waits the sky turns back, the wind begins to wail
Now lightening strikes upon the ship, and fire burns the sails
No warning of the storm to come, as waves engulf the ship
This voyage planned, and now most damned, inauspicious trip


She holds her breath and says a prayer and begs our Lord divine
To spare the ship, and save her man, and calm the mad coastline
The wind calms down, sun shines through, and clouds begin to lift
The woman falls, down on her knees, to thank God for this gift


She runs into her sailors arms, as he comes from the sea
The storm was short, and incomplete, but none the less deadly
The fury of the storm was spent, as quickly as it came
Our rescues here so close at hand, if you call our Lord's name.

Anita
6/1/01


This is one of my ALL TIME favorite paintings (actually I have lots) and I wrote this poem for the painting.




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 Reviews of "The Hand of Deliverance"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on July 18, 2003
Excellent tale and art...beautifully done.
Amor

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
The painting is beautiful and you've done a beautiful job in looking for it mate

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
Masterful write...so so profound...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
And you did a wonderful job! I love the way you rhyme Lady A!!

Jack

Reviewed by Teresa Dybevik
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
...meant saved... but he is still swimming somewhere....lol!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003

This is beauty at it's highest. Love the idea and the message in this. HE indeed is never far when we need Him. Love you for this! You know.... The first part is what exactly was going through my mind when I was in Norway. It was so painfully beautiful. The man thing and all. My ship wrecked...lol... no one was sabed...lol! THIS was AWESOME!

Thanking you,

Teresa

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
Ahhhhhh but you're good!!

An excellent poem......*impressed*

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
WOW THIS IS SO AMAZING I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!! :)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Stunning write Anita!

~Joseph

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
a wonderful poem of inspiration......excellently written!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
A Masterpiece this is and one of the best ..Superior job Lady A

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
WOW painted the painting in my mind, no need to see the painting, triablbic

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
A beautiful, touching story and a wonderful pic.
S

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Lady A, Both poem and painting are masterpieces. One complementing the other.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
This is superb Anita!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
What can be said that hasn't? Your words lift me to places I have never been.

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
this is one of my all time favourite poems now,, i loved it,, at first i thought it was almost an answer to one i wrote some time ago called should i have lived but since my hero died it wasn't but the story was perfect really perfect ,
thank you steve

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
This is superb Anita ...it really is. You have a gift!
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Lady A~
Art and verses are masterful.
Beautiful.

pax
;)
Lady P~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Great write that goes well with the painting. Inspiring message :-)


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