Reality (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Reality(lord, little "L") of past and present. I have hope(Lord, big "L") in the future.

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

lovely

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

Quite beautiful, ~Z~ as always are your writes, Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

I love the way you expressed the contrast here. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Very deep!

Safi

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Sounds as if the serf will live longer than his lordship.

Reg

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

very creative and poetic
I really enjoyed this

peace

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Mizzlady -

Unique - loved the symbolism in this exceptional piece ...

Robert

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Well written Zen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Good write...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Most profound, and proves very nicely that 'reality' is very very different for very very many, even though we all reside in the same earthly domain.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Looks like the serf needs a change of mindset. Nice write.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Somewhere in Proverbs it says something to the effect, better vegetables and bread with peace than a fatted calf with turmoil. . . hold on a minute, I'm gonna look it up. . . .

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. . . . Okay! here is is:

Proverbs 17:1
"Better is a dry morsel, and quietness therewith, than an house full of sacrifices with strife."

Oh well, I may not quote the Bible like a scholar but I try to apply its teaching to my life and writing, and you did a great job with this one MizzSistahLadyLady!

blessin's
c.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Mizzlady, very interesting poetry...well written poet.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Well composed, fantastic analogy!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Wonderful write! :-)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Hasn't changed much in the passage of time. Well done