Living on the edge praying not to derail becoming sad as glow fades, laughter falls silent withdrawing your feelers
You might discover your error right away but you could also ride under a mistaken impression for years to come from just a window seat
Shrinking any overextended existence let the community go its own way as you take care of endlessly switching rails to be sure that you arrive safely at your next station from a slower pace
Own the view where you can stand both your feet planted firmly on the ground having enough elevation to feel as if you`re flying free styli'n through mountains of granite
Wonderful imagery Lady Vivian....
as we forge our way through life on the fast track
it certainly can overextend us and as life goes we
learn to face it at a slower pace...
Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2013
Isn't life just like that, pity we don't have a well informed pointsman to ease the journey. That image of us being pretty much passengers on the rail of life is not far from the truth. Well thought out piece.
This poem has deep meaning, Vivian, and should be well heeded by us all.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2013
YOU HAVE BEEN BLESSED VIVIAN...WISE AND BEAUTIFUL WORDS COME EASY FOR YOU...A GIFT INDEED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING ANOTHER..WONDERFUL PIECE OF WORK..ANNA
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
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as we forge our way through life on the fast track
it certainly can overextend us and as life goes we
learn to face it at a slower pace...
Love and Light
Lily
with well chosen sustained image;
the second stanza is a beauty
john
budd
Ron
To discover inspirations. A granite adventure in this
'fast tracking' visual.
Lady Mary Ann