Another uniquely visual piece (like 'The Hitchhiker') that offers the reader more than just words. I'm discovering, as I get older Jerry, that the visual and artistic aspects of poetry become more and more predominant in my motivations. A poetic insight that resonates nicely with me. Well done. Peace... r
Winter's chill can certainly conjure up warm moments. Unfortunately, those days are gone for you and I living down where images like you show rarely occur, warm hearths are not built into hovels and not used by many. But we can still be touched by a warm hand and hot chocolate if we are lucky.
What I appreciate about this piece is the nature of the last stanza suggesting that the images could represent an ethereal enigma or a real being.
"a hand touches my shoulder
heavenly aroma triggers a smile
she hands me hot chocolate
I drink in her love
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Love ya!
Jane
But we both have fond memories of what you write.
Ron
"a hand touches my shoulder
heavenly aroma triggers a smile
she hands me hot chocolate
I drink in her love
Thoroughly enjoyed.