"...because of my love for all things..." is the heart of the message, the inner truth Asa has discovered and once discovered never leaves.
This is fine work.
Parts of this make me think of Jesus and his sacrificing His life so that we may have eternal life. This is a profound piece that says so much more than any of us can begin to understand, I think.
To look beyond and see the inner person is sometimes hard to do. If a person can get past the outer being and look into the soul , they can learn much ! There is a lot to think about in this poem written with wisdom and compassion! ....M
Reviewed by Richard Arrington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
When you find "my love for all things." you find internal peace.
Just as life during the pandemic was color-coded with different hues representing different levels of danger, life in its aftermath has become shaded in similar ways. As a self-styled “Seeker of Beauty with Beauty,” (borrowing from a quote by W.E.B.
In a post-coup America, an Illinois farm boy is drawn into the resistance by his brother's death. Captured, he is given a choice: betray his friends, or the girl he loves will be lobotomized.
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The flow in your poem is excellent.
This is fine work.
John
Jesus! A very powerful write!
Much Love
Always!
Janet xx
Georg