Jerry gave you a kiss and I send you a hug that it sounds to be needed...e
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2012
Budd, Lily, Jerry and I agree on this one. I truly value these two lines in this well-expressed poem: "Give me you/You are what I fell for" Although changing 'what' to 'who,' since this subject is a person, is a suggestion.....I'd sure say those two marvelously-worded lines to someone who may be slipping away. Good perplexing question as your last two lines. More please :) ~~ Diana
Jerry is right, and men are not mind readers either. You have to let them know what you need. Otherwise, they go on their merry way thinking everything is just fine.
Men are men. It took me many years to understand that women just need a lingering touch at the right time, or a neck nuzzle for no apparent reason. Here Jane is a (((((supple kiss on the nape of your neck.)))))
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budd
(Laughing at Jerry, he is so cool)
Affection back to you Jane,
You are loved
Love and Light
Lily