Excellent tribute for people who serve food to others for a living. I try to give more than the average tip, especially for exceptional service. Sometimes I even give them copies of a book along with cash for a bookmark. Smiles of thankfulness usually abound. One time all the folks at our table took up a collection for one who was having a hard time paying the rent that month. It was more than enough and sh always would smile and thank us long after that day. Well done Jane!
Reads like from experience. My mom lived that life for many years. Stopped at the counter she served one time for a hamburger. Best waitress I ever had… Filled my coffee before I asked. I gave her a big tip.
After a hard day's work, she always came home to feed a hungry family.
I'd like to be served by you...do I need to rephrase that...? LOL e
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2013
Nicely done, Jane. Much in the way of local colour here, a touch of the salacious flirtation, a hint of all the hard work involved, and a hush of the rush to slow down as homeward bound freedom awaits at the end. Good mixture of imagery. Nice unity of rhyme... from 'job' to 'Rob'... There's a whole 'nother poem in that cat's name!!
Hah! This is cute, Jane. I hear you talking, for a waitress there is always somebody, or some thing to feed. Good to see you posting again, haven't seen you around for a while.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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Cute write. Enjoyed.
Waitressed too~!~
Lady Mary Ann
what an awesome poem to stir
the wonderful memories Jane
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& The Coffee Counter Men
Vickie
Regis
Always,
Deborah
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John Michael Domino
After a hard day's work, she always came home to feed a hungry family.
Ron
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