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The Fog
by Jane Noponen Perinacci → (All Poetry by Jane Noponen Perinacci)
Tuesday, February 10, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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The fog that rolled in is so blinding
I can't seem to find my own way
Forever the senses reminding
Look for the north star
Seek its light

I wander unable to cipher
Unable to see past the fog
Forever looms this the feared viper
I've wandered so far
In the night

Find shelter 'til morning comes clearing
The fog and again I can see
No longer feel lost nor the fearing
So peculiar
I'm set right

 

Jane Noponen Perinacci
 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Fog"
Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on February 15, 2015
This is a great rendering of both literal and figurative fog, Jane.
Thank you for sharing,and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 13, 2015
Sometimes, the fog swallows the mountain up here and one can see next to nothing and it is very hard to drive due to zero visibility. But you are using the fog metaphorically here as well. Nicely done, Jane. You meant to write "its" in the fifth verse. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 12, 2015
I absolutely hate it when I cannot find the north star. I especially love your line, "I wander unable to cipher." Sort of the story of my life. -- Jeff Mason

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 11, 2015
cool metaphor ... have to see through it ...

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on February 11, 2015
~Jane~
Amazing that the North Star is stunning and a blessing when
seen through the fog! Look for it in the eve when I'm out
and about!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 11, 2015
Life is full of pitfalls that put us in a fog of confusion, indecision, fear or other something blocking our progress… Until we see the light! Hallelujah!

I guess all the other commenters are in a fog. ;-) Driving one time 970 miles from Boulder Colorado to Wisconsin, I started seeing ghost animals on the road in the fog and had to pull over and sleep on a picnic table till morning. But you read that in my autobiography.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on February 11, 2015
My dad was a trucker, and one time when I was a kid and riding along with him, we got caught in a pea soup thick fog that seemed to roll in out of nowhere. Stuck en route, my dad had me standing on the front bumper, and telling him where the road was so he could keep going. I don't remember how long I out there, but eventually we drove out of the fog, and I climbed back in the cab no worse for the wear. Have a parent try that today!

Michael D.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 11, 2015
We are both on a supernatural bend this morning.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 11, 2015
Creepy poetry this morning . . . The fog is a nine-line bitch when it gets this bad. Unsettling to say the least. Poeish poem the early morning. Loved it.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 10, 2015
Hi Jane, I know this is likely fictional but it is a reality faced by sailors everyday...I was in the ocean ina relatively small boat once, a 21 footer with only an outboard motor, had plenty of fuel andn my compass worked, but had no fog horn, nor anyway to know if there were other boats around...we had been fishing and we almost ran into an American nuclear sub that surfaced not far from us...never know whats out in that fog...-e-


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